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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Numb No moth to butterfly, nulled of liberty I know not the touch of God's hand no sweep across my spirit from His paintbrush of beauty to soar nevermore across the land, dissapointment, heart of regret lowly is all my soul shall ever know 'tis the plan of destiny, unholy these seeds of woe I sow, I no longer have use for this emotion - the poison breath of pain those who are worthless, sip of death's potion, need be numb, no chain of strain By Melissa Honeybee |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Melissa...."...blessed are the poor in spirit for they shall......????" Nonetheless, a lovely poem. Bob |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
His love is unconditional. Just ask and all will be forgiven. There is a lot of emotion hidden in these words. I hope you find peace. All writing comes |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Melissa: Mighty strong writing here, and the last line says it all - it is all about choices, and if you weave woe into your soul, it will be surrounded by dark. It is all about choices. This was a fantastic write, I applaud you on this one. "heart of regret lowly is all my soul shall ever know 'tis the plan of destiny, unholy these seeds of woe I sow," |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Beautifully written, yet lingers a sense of shame that binds and regrets that stifle. Hopefully this is your muse writing, rather than what is happening to you. Wishing you peace and fulfillment. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is a fine poem, I 'm VERY impressed. Kathleen Blake |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Melissa..hugs i am praying for you. Let the dark and painful stuff all go out...let the light back in. He loves you very much! Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you very much everyone for your kind replies and for the advice~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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