I'd call her on Monday, Maybe

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Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

0 posted 2001-04-02 02:15 PM

She gave me her number
nice and round
with zeros and
eights

looked at the folded
post it
and decided to call
her on Monday

one day

maybe

sometimes it's enough
to look good in
business suits
tan hose and
mini skirts

perhaps

but under that
alluring sexterior
she wasn't
suited

for me

on Monday
maybe

but

I had her number

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 2001-04-02 02:18 PM

Uh, I hate to be the one to break it to ya - but it's Monday!... LOL

Had lots to say on this one but I've decided to just keep my big mouth shut, ok? Liked it though.
Michael

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2001-04-02 02:42 PM

very provocative poem! and? I find it---more telling what we DON'T REPLY, than what we DO!!! AND? Just a hint...if her panty hose has no panties? You're IN!!!!

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

3 posted 2001-04-02 03:07 PM

awww go ahead... call her...why not? life is short, remember? lol

cool pome, as usual, LR.... nice to see you flew back in.....

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2001-04-02 03:11 PM

But does she have yours? *S* (Does vrooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm even have a number? LOL) I like this one, nephew... even though I'm still waiting for my Monday! *G*

Nicole
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since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

5 posted 2001-04-02 04:27 PM

Look at those lines!

So very good to read you again - don't see enough of you around.

Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

6 posted 2001-04-02 06:21 PM

Micheal -- all I can say is if you take the number ya gotta call -- right?? thanks

Serenity --

you think??? lol

adorable one -- it was that line of reasoning that got me where I am today...

he he he...

auntie -- if she had my number she wouldn't have given me hers..

nicole -- spank you very much!

Hate is a dead thing. Who of you would be a tomb? -Kahlil Gibran

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-04-02 06:58 PM

love this one LR, but a number with 8's and 0's???

Hope that they're not together. . . like 800-***-****

great poem. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

PoeticaL
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since 2001-03-31

Posts 50

8 posted 2001-04-02 07:17 PM

ahhhhhhhhhhh. Some good poetry again. From the man that taught me how to seperate my poetry. Well...I'm still struggling with that one. So I'll still take all the help I can get. *S*

I was just "scrolling" around and ran into you again. Glad I did. Nice piece. Never a let down when you click on the Local Rebel name.

"I'm a junkyard full of false starts....Elliot Smith"

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

9 posted 2001-04-02 07:42 PM

Very good my friend...and sometimes we need to pass, don't we.

jwesley

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

10 posted 2001-04-02 08:30 PM

Yes..pass on her number..take mine! Mine has lots of 5's and 7's and 3's..much more 'odd' don't you think?

Nice to read you again sir.

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

11 posted 2001-04-02 08:45 PM

simple words - smooth as silk. The poet has style....good to see you back, rebel..

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

12 posted 2001-04-03 06:06 AM

Enjoyed-good to see you again!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

13 posted 2001-04-03 10:17 AM

lol, love your critique...and yep, that sounds like you

nice work reb...pocketed maybes...hmmmm nice writing

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

14 posted 2001-04-03 10:31 AM

A concise piece....well done Reb....

Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

15 posted 2001-04-03 12:09 PM

roflmao@sven.... no.... no 800 numbers here man!!! too funny...

PoeticaL -- if I taught you how to do anything to do with poetry I'm flattered -- I read one of yours last evening and it was a knock-out! -- thank you

jwesly -- thanks and yep!

goddess --- yep -- those sound like some kinky numbers!!

thanks

deer -- thank you -- sometimes simple is best eh?

rose -- thank you m'lady

jellybeans -- pickyourselfupoffthefloorandstoplaffinatmydillemas -- lol -- yep -- pocketed -- aint that me all over the place???

Sunshine -- consiscion'r'us!!! thanks!

thanks again all

some people never go crazy. what truly horrible lives they must lead -- Charles Bukowski

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

16 posted 2001-04-09 07:32 PM

I run into so many old favorites here. Very good writing here! I always enjoyed your writing and hope to see more from you!

Brad Majors
aka Darksoul, Dan -from the old scroll.org days.

zoe
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since 2001-02-05

Posts 34

17 posted 2001-04-10 02:01 PM

well I have been told I look good in a mini...lol...would have to buy a box of razors prior to slipping inside the hosiery *g*....miss you....hey...need me to send you my number? bet you lost it *nods her head*
hugs and smiles....good to see you here

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