Open Poetry #13 |
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Rising Dreams ................. {OF #1} |
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Sunshine
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Rising Dreams So quiet, so quiet. Shhh. Whisper. It is dark, but not, it is light, almost, and within myself I feel the urge to rise, always hesitant at first, the fear of falling ever-heightened. I am always alone at this time. I know it is since no one must descry: I can fly! And I do so, willingly, even with the uncertainty the fear always brings. Once my mind overcomes the apprehension, the magic euphoria of the uplifting freedom then emerges, and I can look ahead, and back, upward, and down, my only fear now of hearing a voice that will cause me to crash. This part is the time I cherish best, the total freedom, the weightlessness, and the elegant beauty from the heights I can reach. By myself. Alone. I share the nightly day-time firmament with no birds, no mechanical structures, no butterflies. I wonder why no butterflies. Sometimes the lift into the heavens comes slowly; other times I am just there overhead, looking down on me. I hope in my dreams I shall always be given flight. ©KRJ 28 August, 1999 Karilea |
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Posts 22676with you |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Peter Pan -is there - come Wendy - - we shall fly - |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Karilea, This is such a pretty piece. I flew once when I was nine years old. I've never forgotten the way it felt. You've described it well. Thanks. ![]() Michael Proust- |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Funny...I always have butterflies! This was so full of images, I am still flying! Beautiful my friend. ~*~ I write, therefore I am ~*~ |
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