Open Poetry #13 |
The Accolade |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I now enter the hall of the great castle the trumpets sound to announce my arrival the doors open wide to welcome me they are all here Lords and Ladies come from all around the land Knights and Squires from every corner of the world I begin to walk the path down the center the path that ends with her the Princess Kellelynn she of flaxen hair of gold and eyes of meadow green as I continue to walk the path I remember when this path started, long ago children of seven, we played and laughed together our imaginations conjuring up the most wonderful tales I would always be her hero, her Knight, her champion and she would be the Lady, my heart, my own we wiled away many a day and week at this then one day, she told me she could not play again the time for her training as Princess had come and to my knees I fell, taking her hand in mine as I made to her this promise 'Kellelynn, to thee this day I make this promise this pledge of my heart of hearts one day, I will be before thee again to receive from thee the Accolade as a Knight then will I pledge my love for thee and thou wilt be mine for all time' that was the last time I saw her before today I heard that she grew to be the most beautiful in the land there was ne'er such a Princess more loved by her people ne'er such a Princess who loved her people more many had come and tried to win her tender hand but there was none who could sway her heart none that could fill her tender eyes and give her the love she dreamed of for so long true to my word, I became a Knight serving my land and my King with honor and bravery but every day, every night, I kept her close to my heart ne'er forgetting a pledge made so very long ago a pledge that carried me through battle and joust a pledge that gave me purpose and purified mine heart and now, I have reached the end of the path I began the end of my battles and the end of my journey kneeling before her, I hear her say, 'Kneel brave Knight' and to my knees I sink before her, head bowed hearing the words 'In the name of God, King and country, I Knight thee, rise now and be Knight, Sir Gilven. . . ' I rose not, and took her hand in mine looking into those eyes again as I did then to her I pledged my heart, my soul, and my life she wept and pledged her own heart to me in return the Accolade I received then was not was wonderful as the one I receive from her every morning when she wakes and says 'I Love You. . .' Image: The Accolade by E. Blair Leighton, 1900 ---------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 04-02-2001).] |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
WOW! I loved this! |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Sir Sven of the Order of the Romantics. I raise my sword to you. |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
*Sigh* *Melt* Suffice to say: I loved this. The weaving of reality with fantasy makes for ledgends in poetry. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Beautifully told!! Love does last over time. A Gentle and magical feel to this. You have a wonderful ability with this type of writing. "I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one." [This message has been edited by Just A Woman (edited 04-02-2001).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, Well you already know what I think of this pic, but I wanted to say you have written a wonderful story to accompany it. Well done! LW All writing comes |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
AD dear heart ride in and carry me off love, do I adore this one, well, you know I do don't you!! Utterly truly outstanding, BEAUTIFUL FABULOUS WORK and I'm never biased love you know I'm not. And why didn't this come slipping in under the wire, Hummm! Take care love as always Bubbles Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
JLR, thank you!!! PK, raise not your sword to me sir. . . for thou are indeed a member of said order as well. . . many thanks. . . Julian, indeed, this is a legend that has been told for many years, and hopefully for many years more. . . thanks to thee. . . Just a Woman, surely love grows where the heart is fertile. . . and this type of writing is truly who I am. . . thanks gentle lady. . . Lone Wolf, I know that thou dost like the art that I have chosen to accompany this tale, and that the story did indeed write itself. . . thanks to thee. . . Lady Marsha, I am indeed honored that thou hast taken the time to reply to this humble wordsmith. . . thy comments are always welcome. . . and I know that thou showest no bias towards mine work at all fair lady. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
*swooning over here* I'll be your fair maiden if you promise to write love poetry like this for me every day As always, you are the king of romance, this is so beautiful and is enhanced perfectly by that famous graphic. Now take a bow, Sir Sven!~ Take care, Melissa~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 04-02-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
OMG it's beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Kathleen Blake |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Breathtaking... How did I miss this yesterday? still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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