Open Poetry #13 |
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My Own Piece of Paradise |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
The silvery moon casts a shadow on the lawn As the day now closes And the fairies begin to yawn So busy they have been In my garden all day On a blanket of baby tears fern Is where they now lay Such a paradise for them And certainly for me Whether I'm just admiring my garden Or relaxing under my birch tree The birds have come to roost for the night In my flowering gum As they ruffle up their feathers And wait for the sun But now night has come No more work to be done Time to rest for a while As I begin to smile About the day spent in my garden How happy these thoughts make me feel So tonight I'll dream of my garden And know my dreams will be for real Suetang |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Beautiful, how often we forget the beauty that comes forth from a garden, a gift of paradise here on earth. |
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tradewind Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 101 |
lovely reflections of a peaceful day... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you for your lovely comments about my beautiful garden. Thank you......Sue Suetang |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You are just getting tooooo good! This was simply beautiful! I loved it, as I do everything you are writing, pen on . |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Very beautiful writing...I really enjoyed it....peace!! Nathan |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Such a peaceful and tranquil read Sue, very lovely! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
bump |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Sue, Lovely, my friend. This is the same feeliing I get while in a forest or sitting beside a stream. Thank you. Michael Proust- |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Alas my life is sans Gum and Waddle, so I must look through your poetic eyes to enter the garden. And well did you let me walk with you. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I am so glad that through my poetry, so many people have been able to enjoy my beautiful garden which brings me so much joy. This is one of many poems I have written about my garden which is always a source of inspiration and change for me. Thanks so much for your kindness......Sue Suetang |
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