Open Poetry #13 |
Written On The Wind |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~Written On The Wind~ ~*Marge Tindal*~ For it is written on the wind that you should come my way Blowing in as a forever friend coming home to stay ~*~ Holding forever in our hearts seeking to remain friends from a long-ago time yet always the same ~*~ I will watch the wind and wait until the gentle breezes of you caress my face with familiar trace then I'll know it's true ~*~ You have come home to this heart where you always will belong Sharing heartfelt memories lending my heart a song ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Forever friends are the best kind! This is beautiful, Marge! Love ya Denise |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Marge,...'written on the wind' is so nice to me. I think the wind holds lots, and shares with us it's all. Thank YOU for sharing this sweet write. *Peace you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ My ~Warrior~ gets the nod of credit for this one- He sent me an e-mail and closed with - Catch you on the next gentle breeze~ Poof ! Inspiration ... isn't it wonderful to have forever friends ? Count yourself on board ! ! SpitFire~ I agree ... and a homeward wind is such a welcome breeze. Thanks, love. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Lovely! I shall like to set sail with the crew of "forever friends", maybe I can be the cook? Catch you on the next tide, Captain Marge! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ Aye, Matey ! 'Tis a'sailing we will go ! And can ya' cook lassie ? Well .... come on board ! This friendship is set to sail ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
What Denise said! Love this. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
And what an inspiration he must be to incite such lovely words from you[This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 04-01-2001).] |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Lovely you, exsquisite poem. We're sorry..this heart has been d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d. Should you like to hold the line we'll be glad to reconnect you.. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
As always, your poetry is beautiful and sprinkled with wisdom. Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ Yeah ! Forever-Friends ... me too ! Paula~ Yes ... a true inspiration. Thanks, Hon. Temptress~ Thank you ... it's totally inspired. Joyce~ I appreciate that. Thanks so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
oooooooooooohhhhhhhhhh *S*... I have one of those! *S* Makes breath worth breathing, doesn't it? *S* Great work, Marge... any forever friend of yours is a lucky person! *S* |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Beautiful, BRAVO!!! Hope you don't mind my saying so. Excellent rhythm, flow, tightness, IMHO and the message...***SUPERB*** |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, SuthernGal~ The bestest friends are the forever friends. Friends who step into our hearts - and not on them ... are cherished beyond measure. And though they may be apart from us ... they blow as gently through our thoughts as if they were right beside us. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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