days like this (re-post/re-write from Open #4)

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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2001-04-01 03:00 PM

I really hate days like this
days without you
days spent dreaming of your kiss
days of feeling blue
where being with you is my only wish

you're so close and yet so far
on days like this
do we see the same morning star?
do we have the same wish
to be together as we are?

we each go through the day
on days like this
but the one thing I want to say
is that it would be bliss
if with your heart mine could stay

the thing I hate most
about days like this
days without you
is that days like this,
dreaming of your kiss

turn into nights like this . . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

1 posted 2001-04-01 05:09 PM

the day..the night..it all turns and turns...a never ending process and before we know it we've concentrated so much on what we don't have that we forget what we do have. So, we try to smile, try to breathe, and even write a little poetry somewhere in the middle of it all. Life is wonderful, isn't it supposed to be? Sorry for the rambling...Beautiful poetry from your Sven Pen.

We're sorry..this heart has been d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d. Should you like to hold the line we'll be glad to reconnect you..

Just A Woman
Senior Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

2 posted 2001-04-01 05:16 PM

I know that loneliness. Written with a very quiet and gentle voice, Sven. Just beautiful.

"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

3 posted 2001-04-01 05:18 PM

Goodness, such a delightfully easy writing style. Soothing and soulful. Truly enjoyed this.

"I am not now that which I have been."

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2001-04-01 05:26 PM

enjoy

Tennessee Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-06-03

Posts 661
Tennessee

5 posted 2001-04-01 06:18 PM

What a beautiful melody this one has, sven. I could feel the longing in the words. Excellent as usual.

Panne415
Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 104
San Antonio

6 posted 2001-04-02 01:55 AM

Sven, Great ending! And nice read but the end was so right on! Panne

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-04-02 07:32 PM

Temptress, there's nothing wrong with a little rambling. . .thank you. . .

Just a Woman, I'm sorry that you know this lonliness. . . perhaps one day, you won't. . .

. . . thank you. . .

Julian, thank you for reading my friend. . .

vandana, always good to see you. . .

Angel, I'm glad that you enjoyed my friend. . .

Panne, thanks!! Glad that you stopped by. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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