Open Poetry #13 |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I come before Him humbly My soul stained with sin Worldly pleasures have corrupted And tarnished me in my eyes Yet I feel drawn to His house As if He is calling me home When I arrive I feel immediately That I belong here with Him I hear the sounds of praise Flowing from within welcoming me As I enter the chapel I feel as if He is embracing me For I have been away for a long time Thinking I could do it on my own Without His guidance and love Only to find I need Him more than ever For He gives me purpose and leads the way Without Him I am lost to the world His word washes over me like rain I am swept away by the promise Of everlasting life through Him I shall never be alone again I know He is always by my side Ready to take my burden All I have to do is ask He takes up the slack effortlessly I am blessed by His divine love It leaves me feeling whole inside My garments are white as snow Wherever He leads is where I’ll go Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
I am reminded of Rabbi Kushner's book, Who Needs God, wherein the fist sentence he answers, "I do." Compassionate write. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
And I hope that anyone feeling this way would continue to find the strength to never stray from that path. Truly beautiful. I wish for others (and you if this is your truth) the strength that I might one day seek again myself. I usually don't reply to poetry like this, but I opened it, and didn't feel a pull to stop reading. We're sorry..this heart has been d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d. Should you like to hold the line we'll be glad to reconnect you.. |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What a lovely testament to your faith. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed very much...James |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Julian - The Rabbi is a wise man indeed. Thanks for reading! Temptress - The path is that of righteousness and does require strength to resist the temptations of the world, but the rewards are eternal. Thanks for continuing to read this one. This is my truth and the path I have chosen. I did stray, but I have once again found my way. I hope you do too. Mysteria - Thank you my friend. James - Happy to hear you enjoyed! All writing comes by the grace of God. -Ralph Waldo Emerson [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 04-02-2001).] |
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