Open Poetry #13 |
Little Simples |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Little Simples ~*~ overwhelming love spoken in a whisper's sigh yes, I love you, too ~*~ in a hushed "I do" promises are safe within lifetime memories ~*~ in my winter come shall I see only content in your loving eyes ~*~ my hand in your hand a simple gesture, this touch never meant so much ~*~ voices on the wind kisses sent by breeze of day validate my love ~*~ Karilea |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
you're awesome, y'know that? lovely perfect verse..... |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
The title for this could not be more perfect. Lovely, Sunshine!
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
and you call these little simples....oh my...these are great my friend.....love them all. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ 'my hand in your hand a simple gesture, this touch never meant so much' PERFECTION ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Simply beguiling... |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful Little Simples Karilea! Lovely! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
These little simples are priceless, and what a collection of gems you gave us here, thank you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
in my winter come shall I see only content in your loving eyes ===================== not "simple" ... simply superb |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and my friends kept in touch with simple, heartfelt responses....thank you all...see you soon.... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
These little simples are the holy grail for many of us who're left just looking. *S* |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
When done with brevity and simplicity your poems are just that much more beautiful. I cannot imagine any that could surpass these! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Sigh - Beautifully written, Sunshine. A poem I can truly appreciate. Michael |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Beautiful, Sunshine. Such a quiet gentle piece seeping with tender love. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lovely! In the dew of little things, |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Nothing simple about this poem. Such loveliness penned so well. Thank you. Michael Proust- |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
Sunshine, very nice write. Red |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Simply beautiful . . . to the library with these gems . . . All writing comes |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Beautifully romantic senryus Take care, Melissa~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Wonderful!!!! ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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