Open Poetry #13 |
The Sweetest of Dreams |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
While everyone else lays sleeping And the moon has cast its beams Mr. Sandman comes to visit me Bringing me the most wonderful dreams With a sprinkle of dream dust On my pillow he does throw Then he's gone into the night And into my dream world I will go Such peace and harmony do my dreams bring So many beautiful birds around me do sing Then I look ahead further Past the twinkling stars And right ahead in front of me There you are You walk towards me Is that a smile I see? As you reach out for my hand And take me to a better land Mesmerised by each other In a land free from pain Where only our love and our hearts they do reign We ride together on moonbeams Across the skies we do glide With your arms wrapped around me Never leaving my side In dreams we're always together In dreams we never part In dreams I can't control The rapid beating of my heart Time has no end here in my dreams Things are not always quite as they seem Just to be here with you Forever and a day To hear the lovely things That you have to say I don't need more than this Maybe just one more kiss? Would you take me to heaven? Would you go there with me? We'll sing loves beautiful tune As we fly to the moon What's this I can see as I open my eyes? The sun's early rays are appearing outside Mr. Sandman has retreived The dream dust from my eyes With some sadness It's only then I realise That you're not here in my arms Lying peacefully next to me Oh, how much joy that would surely bring me If only it could be....... Suetang |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Time has no end here in my dreams love that thought... I have been working on a time poem too...just havent completed it yet *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Without our dreams, would we wake in the morning? I'm not so sure. We should all wish each other 'sweet dreams'. (Hope yours continue) Kraw' |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
If only it could be......(you and me) What a wonderful dream are they not wonderful things to write about? I eat food on purpose before bed just to have them, ha! Nicely done. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thanks so much for all your kind words and I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. I am a self confessed dreamer and a true piscean. It gives me peace and much joy to dream as I'm sure it does for everyone. Thank you....Sue Suetang |
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tradewind Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 101 |
very nice dream and very nicely written, Suetang enjoyed this one! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Sue, Very nice work here. I enjoyed this very much. Michael Proust- |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sue, you have a lovely way with words. I enjoyed. In dreams we're always together In dreams we never part In dreams I can't control The rapid beating of my heart I'm off to find more. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful dreams . . . may they come true for you. All writing comes |
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CD Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 101 |
"We ride together on moonbeams Across the skies we do glide With your arms wrapped around me Never leaving my side" -------------------------- Simply sweet. Reminds of a few times or two when is just wish... Great writing. CD |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well written, my friend, dreams are not just for the dreamers...thanks for sharing yours. jwesley |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you everyone so very much. It warms my heart to read such nice comments and I appreciate you spending the time to read myh work. Kind regards....Sue |
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