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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

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with you

0 posted 2001-03-30 12:31 PM

Whispers
Floating on air
Across the sands of time
Take me back to your memory
Once more

~*~

I know
They come from you
I can hear your heart beat
Keeping perfectly in rhythm
With mine

~*~

Daring
The remembrance
To dance into my heart
Stirring me, invoking my love
again

~*~

I ache
With the knowledge
That we will never be
Nothing more than a memory
In time

~*~

~SEA~

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

1 posted 2001-03-30 12:41 PM

Great write.

Memories in time..
Have a lot of them..And lots more to have.
Bernie
a

a day keeps the world

'G

Bernie Slicker

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-03-30 12:42 PM

Its one of those days in here today ...
I cant seem to read with out either crying ..
or seeing my self in poetic mirrors.
and you already know I love these ...
and feel every verse.
I been reading all your cinquains ...youre nailing them..poetically and emotionally.
hugs Sea-gator

oh you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
my body aches to breathe your breath
your words keep me alive
~Sarah McLachlan~

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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3 posted 2001-03-30 12:45 PM

thank you bernie

Janet~ yes, my sweet friend, I know you know too well.....( sorry, I can't seem to stop playing with these cinquains....they are really fun.....I already have more......)

SEA

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-03-30 12:56 PM

wow. . . these are excellent SEA. . .

touching and full of a heart. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

5 posted 2001-03-30 01:04 PM

I knew you weren't done....

{~,^}

SEA

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6 posted 2001-03-30 01:07 PM

thanks Sven

Sunshine~ I have one for Balladeer too.......

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2001-03-30 01:49 PM

I too ache...for memories that should be new experiences...James

PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

8 posted 2001-03-30 03:14 PM

Oh...to ache is to be human. To make yourself happy, now that is truly a blessing. That's what its all about, finding out what gives us pleasure and going for it. Looks like you are the cinquain queen SEA.

SEA

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9 posted 2001-03-30 04:25 PM

James~

I'm looking forward to the day your ache ends my sweet poet friend.......

PK~

Pleasure
A want………a need
For my body and mind
The time for talking is over
~ now give ~

~SEA~

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

10 posted 2001-04-04 07:53 PM

beautiful presentation.Sea, just beautiful

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

11 posted 2001-04-04 09:29 PM

Bittersweet and beautiful, I relate to your words very much so, in my life, for the past 3 years now, I have held on to his memory, lost in ache. "What can never be" or "what might have been" are perhaps the worst words in the english language!

This touched me~

Take care,
Melissa~

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

12 posted 2001-04-05 07:57 AM

SEA~

'Daring
The remembrance
To dance into my heart
Stirring me, invoking my love
again'

You know this one writes new memories.
Wonderful, sweetie.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

13 posted 2001-04-05 09:03 AM

SEA, you Reminded me of a line from a Conan movie, where Arnold says "Enough talk!"

SEA

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Posts 22676
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14 posted 2001-04-05 09:10 AM

Kathleen~ thank you very much

Melissa~ I'm happy this touched you, thank you

Marge~ thank you sweet poetess

PK~ does that mean you want me to shut up?!?!?!

~SEA

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

15 posted 2001-04-05 11:11 AM

How did I almost miss this?

You keep outdoing yourself. You are growing more with every line you pen. I'd try verse to convey my thoughts, but right now any verse I might offer would be sorry indeed in light of your accomplishment.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

16 posted 2001-04-05 11:23 AM

Oh, SEA!! I love these!! How the heck did I miss it the first time? LOL.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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