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Open Poetry #13

Belle

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-03-30 02:01 AM

Belle

Oh my beautiful Michelle
I knew you not so well
as time and circumstance
perchance will tell.
Twas not so much that I was deceived.
More like my heart received
only those feelings and desires
it chose to believe.
While rejecting all the warning signs
that requested my presence numerous times.
Thru time I travel to this place
where I still seek and desire
the smile upon her face.
Yes time seems to have a story to tell
and I still find myself under the spell
of the sweet and sexy belle
I thought I knew so well.
The belle Michelle.

Jameslee@March29,2001

Panne415
Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 104
San Antonio

1 posted 2001-03-30 03:18 AM

James, I liked this. And the way you brought the beginning in again at the end. I thought these lines were very astute.

Twas not so much that I was deceived.
More like my heart received
only those feelings and desires
it chose to believe.

Good job. Panne

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-04-30 04:57 AM

Thank you so much Panne...James

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