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ambermize Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 157California 
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I sit here in amazement, As you head for the door, Our newborn son is crying, But you don't love me anymore, ....and so you go. I live here in this agony, As the night falls on my skin, Our wedding day was beautiful, But I have changed since then, ....and so I cry. Your son, he looks just like you, And he'll never understand, Just why you didn't love him, Placing his world is in your hands, ....and still your gone. My love, I still miss you, Even though you walked away, But missing isn't loving, So I won't beg you to stay, ....and so you go. |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Wow!!! I'm glad I don't need much sleep to survive, otherwise I'd missed your poem. Are you sure he left you at all, maybe he misunderstood how she could find you, if at all? LP [This message has been edited by latin passion (edited 04-29-2001).] |
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ambermize Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 157California |
i wish that were true but he actually did walk away as bad as it hurts to say, thanks for your reply. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
A man who would walk away from such sincerity and love is indeed a fool! Welcome to Passions. Kathleen Blake |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
I felt this  that may seem like a short bland reply but its a perfect response for how this poem hit me |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
But missing isn't loving, So I won't beg you to stay,--- This is heartwrenching. Welcome to passions. As sad as this is...I like the attitude. Let him go. I agree. One baby is enough to take care of. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A soft Welcome to Passions. I hope that, with a new son, you will find time now and again to refresh your soul by reading, and possibly writing, and enjoying what will hopefully become a new family of friends. Please, check your e-mail for a special message. Karilea |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
But missing isn't loving, So I won't beg you to stay, =============================== there is much wisdom and even strength in that line... and also hope for healing, beautiful, bittersweet poem, excellent cadence an rhyme... Welcome to Poetry Land so nice to have you here. take care jm There are two lasting bequests |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Welcome to passions, this is very beautiful and lyrical in its sadness, but it has great strength. Pull up a chair stay a while and bask in the warmth of new found friends. Regards and take care, Olias. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"But missing isn't loving," Wow ... this is a powerful first post ambermize ... Welcome to Passions! I'm looking forward to reading more! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetAmber~ Welcome BACK to Passions.  Honey, you've written the pain of your heart very clearly ... *Hugs* Come on ... the baby's name ? I've been waiting for an e-mail from you or Devina ..... hello ! ! !  Lots of love sent your way. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ambermize Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 157California |
thank you all so much for your reply, and thank you marge, nice to see i was missed. the baby is austin thomas and he's beautiful. i really missed the acceptance i always found here, hard to find anywhere else sometimes! |
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