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Sven
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0 posted 2001-03-29 08:54 PM


shadows and light
play on the wall
the flame of
the candle outside
reflects in your eyes
or does
the flame of
your passion inside
reflect in my eyes?

touch me again
play with me
in the shadows
and
dance with me
in the light

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2001 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you
1 posted 2001-03-29 09:03 PM


ohhhhhh....sensual....sexy......I like...I like....   SEA
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2 posted 2001-03-29 09:17 PM


ahhh....the shadows and the light sure can make for a romantic evening eehhh Sven??  Beautiful words from the romantic tonight.  

Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s*

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3 posted 2001-03-29 09:32 PM


Sven,

Quite wonderful.  

Michael

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"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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4 posted 2001-03-29 09:46 PM


touch me again
play with me
in the shadows
and
dance with me
in the light"


loving this, the dance and the shadows....
be well...

Greeneyes~




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Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
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5 posted 2001-03-29 09:48 PM


Quality time consists of "shadows and light".
Truly the dichotomy of human existence.
I really like your style, Sven!
Thanks again.

"The poet is the priest of the invisible."
Wallace Stevens

[This message has been edited by coyote (edited 03-29-2001).]

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2001-03-29 09:48 PM


Well Sven....look at you....the quiet romantic is back....
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7 posted 2001-03-29 10:03 PM


I like this one, Sven.

Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
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8 posted 2001-03-29 11:23 PM


Sven, what soft poetry you write...
this is really very lovely
i enjoy reading you

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9 posted 2001-03-29 11:59 PM


nothing but tears for this one, Sven. I love your writing.  
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standing on a shadow's lace
10 posted 2001-03-30 01:24 AM


ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh shadow dancing.......... helen
Kethry
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11 posted 2001-03-30 05:54 AM


or dancing in the shadows. So lovely.
Keth

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12 posted 2001-03-30 10:29 AM


The light can play tricks on us.
We tend to just see what we want to see.

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13 posted 2001-03-30 10:39 AM


Delicious. In every way.
Sandra

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14 posted 2001-03-30 01:03 PM


SEA, did you like this one??      Thank you. . .

GS, indeed they can. . . nice to see you again my friend. . .  

Michael, thank you. . .  

Greeneyes, thank you my friend. . . and be well yourself. . .

coyote, thank you. . . welcome to Passions. . . glad that you enjoyed. . .

Sunshine, did he ever really leave??      Thank you my friend. . .

Kathleen, I'm glad that you liked. . .

tradewind, thank you. . . I'm glad that you enjoy my words. . .

Temptress, tears?? . . . thank you. . .

helen, shadow dancing indeed. . .  

Kethry, dancing in the light and the dark. . . thank you. . .

inot2B, that's why the darkness. . .darkness hides not. . . thank you. . .

Sandra, glad that you enjoyed. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

[This message has been edited by Sven (edited 03-30-2001).]

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15 posted 2001-04-27 06:13 AM


Wow like this one, had to bump up to get into library.

Nice one, Sven

Bernie

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16 posted 2001-04-27 06:25 AM


wow this is delightful and a keeper!  How very very romantic!

Aloha with warmest regards, Koko
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