Open Poetry #13 |
shadows and light |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
shadows and light play on the wall the flame of the candle outside reflects in your eyes or does the flame of your passion inside reflect in my eyes? touch me again play with me in the shadows and dance with me in the light ----------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ohhhhhh....sensual....sexy......I like...I like.... SEA |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ahhh....the shadows and the light sure can make for a romantic evening eehhh Sven?? Beautiful words from the romantic tonight. Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s* |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Sven, Quite wonderful. Michael Proust- |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
touch me again play with me in the shadows and dance with me in the light" loving this, the dance and the shadows.... be well... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Quality time consists of "shadows and light". Truly the dichotomy of human existence. I really like your style, Sven! Thanks again. "The poet is the priest of the invisible." Wallace Stevens [This message has been edited by coyote (edited 03-29-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well Sven....look at you....the quiet romantic is back.... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I like this one, Sven. Kathleen Blake |
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tradewind Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 101 |
Sven, what soft poetry you write... this is really very lovely i enjoy reading you |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
nothing but tears for this one, Sven. I love your writing. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh shadow dancing.......... helen |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
or dancing in the shadows. So lovely. Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
The light can play tricks on us. We tend to just see what we want to see. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Delicious. In every way. Sandra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
SEA, did you like this one?? Thank you. . . GS, indeed they can. . . nice to see you again my friend. . . Michael, thank you. . . Greeneyes, thank you my friend. . . and be well yourself. . . coyote, thank you. . . welcome to Passions. . . glad that you enjoyed. . . Sunshine, did he ever really leave?? Thank you my friend. . . Kathleen, I'm glad that you liked. . . tradewind, thank you. . . I'm glad that you enjoy my words. . . Temptress, tears?? . . . thank you. . . helen, shadow dancing indeed. . . Kethry, dancing in the light and the dark. . . thank you. . . inot2B, that's why the darkness. . .darkness hides not. . . thank you. . . Sandra, glad that you enjoyed. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 03-30-2001).] |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Wow like this one, had to bump up to get into library. Nice one, Sven Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
wow this is delightful and a keeper! How very very romantic! Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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