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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2001-03-29 04:32 PM

In my remorse of day
Reigns a pouring truth
That in the pale of night
There falls my ugly youth

May I accept somehow
A life filled with God
And be spoiled by heart
And ever spared the rod

I know, I know nothing
Professed by empty world
So I look within myself
And into darkness hurled

I step away from comfort
And leave my inner zone
That ever kept me safely
Although I was alone

In my sadness, saving
Unbinding lenghts of rope
Tied in knots of new love
Awash in blinding hope

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 03-29-2001).]

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

1 posted 2001-03-29 05:47 PM

Wayoutwalt....

Within my heart "there reigns a pouring truth
...a life filled with God.."
Thus "I look" to find "myself..
Awash in blinding hope."

I like your thought. Bob

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

2 posted 2001-03-29 06:34 PM

Certainly speaks to our inward journey and search for happiness.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Just A Woman
Senior Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

3 posted 2001-03-29 07:38 PM

I enjoy your writing, wayoutwalt.

"Allow me to introduce my selves"

"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

4 posted 2001-03-29 07:44 PM

This is very insightful, walt.
You know a lot.
I liked it.
Thanks.

"The poet is the priest of the invisible."
Wallace Stevens

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

5 posted 2001-03-30 03:02 PM

thank you guys for replying yuh

elisaseyes
Member

since 1999-07-15

Posts 196
fort worth texas

6 posted 2001-03-30 04:12 PM

Really cool lines Walt

May I accept somehow
A life filled with God
And be spoiled by heart
And ever spared the rod

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

7 posted 2001-03-30 04:47 PM

i enjoy your inner thoughts walt...

good to read you..

hugs, g

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

8 posted 2001-04-01 03:51 PM

Walt, this is eloquent, hopeful reflection. Very nicely done!

Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

9 posted 2001-04-01 05:01 PM

Sweet Walt,
I hope your tone is experimental and that you truly are not feeling like this. This was wonderfully done as your work always is. I hope you've been well.

We're sorry..this heart has been d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d. Should you like to hold the line we'll be glad to reconnect you..

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

10 posted 2001-04-01 10:28 PM

"Awash in blinding hope"

GOOD LINE, WALT....

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