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Deep Meditation - (The Story of TwoTankas)
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Deep Meditation - (The Story of TwoTankas) |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
 Deep meditation thoughts trapped running from exile stilled for this moment my heart hears autumn falling my eyes cherish only spring  Tasting silent words my soul content to slumber dusk settles on waters afloat a banner of stars accepting the flux of aging "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
both beautiful....I like the second one best!  SEA |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Lovely, lovely!!! The verses and the photos. Two awesome places on this Earth. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Julian~ Both are such lovely Tankas. A wonderful phrasing form to enhance the graphics. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
they are both lovely, but i like the first one best! thoughts trapped running from exile...oh yes... I relate to this one. aloha, Passion,imagination |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well these were both beautiful, as was your presentation. However, I have to tell you when it comes to accepting the flux of aging...that is where I have a real problem and I tend to fight it every inch of the way |
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