Open Poetry #13 |
Exhaled Thoughts |
Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Exhaled thoughts drift quietly throughout the room Intermixing gracefully as they could only do with one presence Blending and becoming my mood to soak within the burgandy walls that surround me where, night after night, I paint another layer of my life, hopes and dreams in silence "Often the test of courage is not to die but to live" ~Vittorio Alferi~ [This message has been edited by Just A Woman (edited 03-29-2001).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is so visual....I like this one a lot! SEA |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Thank you, SEA, Good morning! "Often the test of courage is not to die but to live" |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
simple and elegant. You might want to edit the 5th to last line though on the word "that" |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Layers and Layers of thoughts, and how to build more layers in ones life... Library this one goes. Bernie A a day keeps the world 'g. Bernie Slicker |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Just A Woman...."Exhaled thoughts..." ....Exquisite. Bob |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Just A Women, I take your hand to take a bow For your eligance and know how. Just A Man |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
is the picture coming together??? it would seem so. . . wonderful images here. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Such a lovely feel to this one JAW, thanks for sharing! |
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