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corey14
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since 2001-05-23
Posts 89
Boston, Mass, U.S.A.

0 posted 2001-05-23 07:26 PM



this world must not like me
i try my hardest
but when i find the one
the only one for me
she lives far away
we were in love
soulmates you could call it
i tryed many people but they wernt for me
it will take me a long time till i find the one for me again
i will find her
i will search till i find her
i will find her  

© Copyright 2001 corey baker - All Rights Reserved
latin passion
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since 2001-04-26
Posts 576

1 posted 2001-05-23 07:40 PM


Happy hunting - I hope you find her.
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
2 posted 2001-05-23 10:57 PM


I would say look closer to you.  
Nice expression.

angelswing
Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705
United Kingdom
3 posted 2001-05-24 05:04 AM


There you go, have a reply on the house . I replied on the other post, but I saw this one and know how difficult it can be when you've only just started .
L.of.L. Tommy .
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'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2001-05-24 06:15 AM


Corey I always look as close as possible...it makes it easier to share time together...a very important element to build a relationship...James
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