Open Poetry #13 |
DIWAAN (Book of poetry) |
Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Apnay samnay apna diwaan khula rukha hay (I have opened my poetry book in front of me) Iss diwaan maen apnay ashaar ko ssja rukha hay (In this book there have been decorated my verses) Inn ashaar maen ikk diya jla rukha hay (In these verses there has been inflamed a candle of love) Iss diyey maen ikk donnwa sa utha rukha hay (In this candle there has been rising a smoke) Iss donnwann maen ikk khushboo ko mahka rukha hay (In this smoke there has been absorbed a fragrance) Iss khushboo maen gum k aanso ko bha rukha hay (In this fragrance there has been flowing a tear of sorrow) Iss aanso maen apnay mahboob ko sma rukha hay (In this tear there has been lived my lover) Iss mahboob maen apnay dil ko bsa rukha hay (In this lover there has been lived my heart) Iss dil maen muhabat ki aag ko luga rukha hay (In this heart there has been flamed the fire of love) Mugar iss aag ko parhai nay buja rukha hay (But the study has been extinguished this fire) ~Wasi~ I love to nice poetry. |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
very cleverly written I enjoyed it |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Somehow I missed this. I regret missing it, but do not regret reading it now. Excellent. |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Wow, I'm glad I read this. |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Thnk you Helen , Temptress and Latin ...I love to you all....... [This message has been edited by Waseem Cheema (edited 05-24-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Waseem...James |
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RLS106 New Member
since 2001-03-31
Posts 7TX, U.S. A. |
I like your poem very much, and the use of the two translations. When I write I like to use words of differnt country and try to fit them in a verse line while keeping meter, context, and overlaid verse line meaning. The best word for this is see. . see:sea:see:si:see:sea . to look to float to take bishops seat to say yes to make love to have been in south east asia. (c) RLS 1975-2001,ALL RIGHTS RESERVED. |
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