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Emptiness |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180
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Im all empty. Im all alone. Its just black and dark. Now when Im left here alone, Im starting to wonder -Where you ever here?- In myself Im hiding. Hiding from this stupid world. Rigth now, it feels like I'll never come out. Im hiding from the truth. I've closed my ears, I don't wanna hear.. Altrough I realize I cannot hide.. The truth catches me everywhere. I can hear your voice inside my head. Like a CD who's played again and again. I keep wondering "why did you say that? why did you do that?" But in real it doesn't matter, cause however I figure it, it all turns into the same. I guess it wasn't meant to be. But I feel this emptiness, this black hole where you were before.. It's like Im so alone whitout you. Im not angry at you, and Im not sad. Im just all empty. And it's even worse. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Loved the last stanza...it's true that even negative feeling will "fill" you up--but emptiness is somehow intolerable. I'd rather be angry than nothing any day of the week. Great expression here. Enjoyed. |
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darabeth Junior Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 33 |
Very nice!Good work!  Dara Beth |
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