Open Poetry #13 |
Best Friend |
Qumar Fatthi Member
since 2001-05-20
Posts 59Pakistan |
Friends are cool! They are not fool Not even cruel Friends are nice to me As they should be Friends are cool! Friends are not bad Not even rude They donot hit me They have never beat me Friends are cool! My friends are best to me They always in good mode Not even make faces Because they are best friends Friends are cool! ~fatthi~ |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Yes...... Friends are always BEST Welcome to piptalk.... Nice to see ur work and hope to see more in later... Best wishes and Good luck for future. I love to nice poetry. [This message has been edited by Waseem Cheema (edited 05-22-2001).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I can't imagine life without friends being there for me. *S* Welcome to Passions! |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
yes Fatthi you are right you can trust them ..because they mean only the very best for you . I like being a best friend .... I know the rssponsibility that goes with it .Your poem makes me think. |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Thanks Cheema,suthern and Helen for your nicely comments about my first poem... |
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Qumar Fatthi Member
since 2001-05-20
Posts 59Pakistan |
Thanks Cheema,suthern and Helen for your nicely comments about my first poem... |
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