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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2001-05-19 08:12 AM



The last thing
I'd expected to lose
was the thing I depend
on most
One peek in the mirror
reveals but a lingering
of this cherished thing's
ghost
Within my eyes,
merely a glimmer
of what it used to be
Sunshine in rain,
laughter in pain,
the thing that set
me free
Now it's gone
forecasts are grim
it's sure to be
missing a while
I can only pray
that soon, someday
I'll surely find
my smile...


~Tier
5/01



© Copyright 2001 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-05-19 08:16 AM


If I could reach across....I'd gift you mine....

a heartbreaker, this...

Tiersdin
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2 posted 2001-05-19 08:18 AM


Thank you, Sunshine, just knowing is enough!

*hugs*

~Tier

Sven
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3 posted 2001-05-19 11:11 AM


I'll tell you what Tier, here's one that I'm not using today. . .  

great job. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Tiersdin
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4 posted 2001-05-19 11:52 AM


Thank you, Sven...

~Tier

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2001-05-19 03:36 PM


Touching...I also wonder where my smile went sometimes...it's even noticable to people around me...James
snowpants
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6 posted 2001-05-21 07:27 PM


Melancholy poem, Tier, but very nicely done...great write!

sp  

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

Tiersdin
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7 posted 2001-05-21 08:56 PM


It's good to know someone understands, James, thank you...

Thank you, Snowpants, I'm glad that you liked...  

~Tier

Waseem Cheema
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8 posted 2001-05-22 02:23 AM


Yes i am too agree to give my smiles to you.....Tiersdin
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9 posted 2001-05-23 11:30 PM


A smile I send your way. Downward lines hard to get rid of.  "Think happy thoughts" a little fairy dust, and up and away. A smile and hug your way.

let our hands communicate what's in our heart. A Wisp of a brush...

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