Open Poetry #13 |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
The last thing I'd expected to lose was the thing I depend on most One peek in the mirror reveals but a lingering of this cherished thing's ghost Within my eyes, merely a glimmer of what it used to be Sunshine in rain, laughter in pain, the thing that set me free Now it's gone forecasts are grim it's sure to be missing a while I can only pray that soon, someday I'll surely find my smile... ~Tier 5/01 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If I could reach across....I'd gift you mine.... a heartbreaker, this... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Sunshine, just knowing is enough! *hugs* ~Tier |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I'll tell you what Tier, here's one that I'm not using today. . . great job. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Sven... ~Tier |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Touching...I also wonder where my smile went sometimes...it's even noticable to people around me...James |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Melancholy poem, Tier, but very nicely done...great write! sp to be with you... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
It's good to know someone understands, James, thank you... Thank you, Snowpants, I'm glad that you liked... ~Tier |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Yes i am too agree to give my smiles to you.....Tiersdin |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
A smile I send your way. Downward lines hard to get rid of. "Think happy thoughts" a little fairy dust, and up and away. A smile and hug your way. let our hands communicate what's in our heart. A Wisp of a brush... |
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