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Loving You
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Loving You |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I believe we are destined lovers Our fate written in the stars By a hand far stronger than mine Placing us on this path That we walked to find each other. I believe you are my one true love The one who fills the hollows inside The one that sets my heart free Making me, not so much, complete But whole. I believe...wont you? |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ 'I believe' that this is a beautiful write ! Straight from the heart ... what a path to take !  *Hugs* to you, gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is very believable. And lovely. Joyce |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
What more can we do...than believe? |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
This is beautiful. The question at the end finishs it off perfect. One must believe in something ..so why not love |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you don't have to tell me twice. . .  loved this one Paula. . . the feelings are great in this one. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Paula, Isn't wonderful when you think you've found this? ~sighs~ Beautifully written TaraB |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I enjoyed reading your poem Paula....wonderful write!! Nathan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Paula this poem reminds me of the Elvis song called "Loving You." James |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Marge...its a start down the right path I think...no I BELIEVE!!! Thanks Joyce...thank you so much JLR...hope as well...thanks Alan...yes why not love? Now theres a challenge for you darlin... Sven...thank you sir...the emotons are pretty deep... Rosepetals...yes its perfectly beautiful...thank you Nathan...Im so glad you enjoyed it...thanks James...you will have to sing it to me babe cuz I'm not real familiar with his stuff... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This poem is fantastic...one of my favorites...James |
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