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Her Song
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Her Song |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
And so she sings in the late of night alerting the sensitive to her plight crying with tears the depth of her pain Sighing so sweetly as she wraps you in chains Chains as tender as a passionate kiss you'll wonder how ever you lived without this eyes so beautifully haunted with sadness your heart falls in love yet breaks with such gladness One song, but a whisper one look, stirs the heart one kiss can be heaven one touch, work of art Just for her touch some claimed they would die, one thousand deaths for a night by her side She now pines for you on this glorious day will you let her in or turn her away? ~Tier 5/01 [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 05-18-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Beautiful! |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Well, other than the thousand deaths thing...that sounds a bit too prolonged, sure I'd let her in. Enjoyed the style of this very much! |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
A siren's song for sure! How could one resist? Well done, very tempting. s arthur S Arthur |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tiersdin~ Such a beckoning song ~ 'One song, but a whisper one look, stirs the heart one kiss can be heaven one touch, work of art' Lovely lilt to this piece. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thanks Sunshine, *hugs* Thank you, JLR, like most females, I love the thought of someone professing they'd die a thousand deaths! *wink* I appreciate your comment! Thank you, S Athur Grey, A Siren, she is. I appreciate your commenting! Thank you, Marge, I kind of like that part best myself! *hugs* ~Tier [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 05-19-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I really need to hear this song Tier. . .  excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I'm sure that there will be many more, Sven, thank you so much for commenting... ~Tier |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I think I would let her in...James |
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