Open Poetry #13 |
Passions Gallery--Temptress (wisteria dreams) |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*Gallery Special Exhibit: Selections from the First Series* she's not who you think she is although she could be she could make you stop and think that she is but you'll never really know all you can do is just talk to her to know her heart to see the person behind the words she exists in time and in space she is everywhere and she is nowhere you don't just know her, you feel her she fills the air like the quiet of her aura making you see yourself she weaves a spell, but not really. . . they're just words, just syllables of night are you sleeping or awake? you realize that you are too late and that you've been having wisteria dreams ----------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
i like it... "she is everywhere and she is nowhere you don't just know her, you feel her" sounds like internet dating hehehe.... good, man, good.... looking forward to more of the gallery -napalm
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
perfectly her, perfectly you... LAuren~ *** |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
A wonderful tribute for Temptress, how could we expect anything less from you Sven? Isis *Enlightenment is within all things* |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Very beautiful tribute, Sven.....I'm sure Temp is very proud of this...peace!! Nathan |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Oh my you've done well with this one Sir! Great Job! ~Sheri |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Dearest friend.. For this, I thank you even more than the first time. You capture me..and that is a rare thing for some these days. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this is a great tribute...and this did discribe her truthfully...beautiful and enjoyed as always...thanks for sharing, sven if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-21-2001).] |
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