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Sven
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0 posted 2001-05-18 09:59 PM


*Gallery Special Exhibit: Selections from the First Series*

she's not who you think she is
although she could be
she could make you stop and
          think that she is
but you'll never really know
all you can do is just talk
          to her to know her heart
to see the person behind the words

she exists in time and in space
she is everywhere and she is nowhere
you don't just know her,
          you feel her
she fills the air like the quiet of her aura
making you see yourself

she weaves a spell, but not really. . .
they're just words,
just syllables of night
are you sleeping or awake?
you realize that you are
          too late
and that you've been having
wisteria dreams

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2001 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
NapalmsConstantlyConfused
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1 posted 2001-05-18 10:01 PM


i like it... "she is everywhere and she is nowhere
you don't just know her,
          you feel her"
sounds like internet dating hehehe.... good, man, good.... looking forward to more of the gallery  
-napalm


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2 posted 2001-05-18 10:13 PM


perfectly her, perfectly you...


LAuren~


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Isis
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3 posted 2001-05-19 12:57 PM


A wonderful tribute for Temptress, how could we expect anything less from you Sven?
Isis

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Nate Dogg
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4 posted 2001-05-19 02:29 AM


Very beautiful tribute, Sven.....I'm sure Temp is very proud of this...peace!!

Nathan

Irie
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5 posted 2001-05-19 02:53 AM


Oh my you've done well with this one Sir!  
Great Job!

~Sheri

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left by those who got there first"



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6 posted 2001-05-20 08:29 PM


Dearest friend..
For this, I thank you even more than the first time. You capture me..and that is a rare thing for some these days.  

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7 posted 2001-05-20 11:55 PM


this is a great tribute...and this did discribe her truthfully...beautiful and enjoyed as always...thanks for sharing, sven  



if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-21-2001).]

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