Dance into my heart....senryu

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Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

0 posted 2001-05-18 05:07 PM

Come, and dance with me
Underneath the moon lit skies
Forever be mine

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-05-18 05:10 PM

There's a whole lotta dancin' goin' on here at Passions this afternoon

Well done. More!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-05-18 05:10 PM

a Waltz made for two
together under heaven
dancing into love

Beautiful Sheri

~SEA

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-05-18 09:54 PM

mind if I cut in??

love this one Sheri. . . good to see you writing again. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-05-18 10:31 PM

Sigh . . . so beautiful . . .

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2001-05-19 01:09 AM

hey you

so nice to see you posting again
and ya are light on your senryu too

romantic syllables and sentiments
well done poetess Irie.

tis never easy being a moth,
tis not easy being the flame.
what some never see is--
sometimes ... most times ...
they are one in the same.

NapalmsConstantlyConfused

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 529

6 posted 2001-05-19 01:48 AM

errrrrr this is a QUESTION more than a COMMENT, but i guess the question is kinda a comment in and of itself, no? i was wondering, since it looks like something i'd like to try, just what, exactly, are the forms / rules for a senryu poem? i'm not sure, and i don't want to go posting all over the place unless i know what the heck i'm doing....any help / comments would be appreciated, as i feel giving this a try might expand my poetic horizons a bit... sometimes working within limits can free your mind in new ways

(as we can all see from the shining examples above)
thanks
-Napalm

I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!
"Why do i smell something burning?!?"
I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

7 posted 2001-05-19 02:15 AM

That's Super!!! It would make a fantastic Valentine's Day card, don't you think?!!

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

8 posted 2001-05-19 02:48 AM

Wow, I'm thrilled with all of your responses.
I didn't expect many as I have been away from PIP for so long.
Thank you all so much !

Interloper, I think there is a lot of dancin' going on here today, hasn't there?

More is on the way.... I hope.

SEA, I love the reply you left!

Funny how few words can often say so much.

Sven, I don't mind at all!

It's great to be back, and great to hear from you.

LW, Thanks Hun.... How are you these days?

JM, It's always so nice to hear from you. You always make a great effort in your replies.

Many Thanks to you!

NapalmsConstantlyConfused, Check your Email. I've sent you the answer to your question! Thank you, and I hope to read one of yours soon!

VAS, I'm glad you think so! I guess it could huh?

Again, many thanks to ALL of you!

Bigs hugs coming your way!

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"

[This message has been edited by Irie (edited 05-19-2001).]

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

9 posted 2001-05-19 03:24 AM

Dance...again and again.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

10 posted 2001-05-19 07:40 AM

Great senryu, I really enjoyed this dance.

Charisma

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

11 posted 2001-05-19 08:01 AM

Beautiful!

~Tier

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

12 posted 2001-05-19 08:19 AM

trip the fantastic
light up my heart with music
splendidly you've danced

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

13 posted 2001-05-19 10:58 AM

Beautiful vision, beautiful poem....peace!

Nathan

Tepok Bopar
Junior Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 27

14 posted 2001-05-22 03:01 PM

Be mine forever,
Beautiful moon lit dancer,
Caressing my soul.

Your poetry moves me Irie. Cheers, Tepok

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

15 posted 2001-05-23 02:16 AM

YOU ALL ARE AWESOME! Thank you, all of you, so much.

Tepok & Sunshine, I like your reply, very nice and heart warming.

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"

[This message has been edited by Irie (edited 05-23-2001).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

16 posted 2004-06-01 12:30 PM

precious

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