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Denise
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0 posted 2001-04-22 08:50 PM


Forget me not when winter comes again
As crystal flakes float gently through the air;  
Remember me when daisies fill the glen,
When hyacinth is blooming everywhere;
Along the ocean side in reverie
Let waves of peacefulness drown sorest grief;
Recall from time to time a memory
A cherished moment shared, however brief;
Again when autumn leaves the warmth behind
And sorrow’s season comes to spend some time
Take comfort in those treasures in your mind
And sing again to springtime’s carefree rhyme.

Forget me not and I will not depart;
You'll find me dancing still within your heart.

  
© Copyright 2001 Denise - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-04-22 08:56 PM

Oh,Denise~
So good to see your beautiful verse~

We'd never forget you
or the lovely smiles you leave everywhere you go.

Love n' hugs~
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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2 posted 2001-04-22 09:11 PM

....and dance there you do, Denise...it's SO good to see you again...
Denise
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3 posted 2001-04-22 09:41 PM

Thank you, Marge and Balladeer, for reading and for you lovely replies. It's always nice to see you too!  
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4 posted 2001-04-23 06:49 PM

You make me want to go out and enjoy the spring time flowers blooming everywhere.
Enjoyed very much!
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5 posted 2001-04-23 07:02 PM

what a gift. . . always wonderful to see these from you. . .



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6 posted 2001-04-23 07:04 PM

This is a rare and beautiful poem.  Joyce
Denise
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7 posted 2001-04-23 07:28 PM

Thank you inot2B, Sven and Joyce, for reading and for your lovely replies. You make writing worth the effort (they don't come easily to me). Thanks again!
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8 posted 2001-04-23 08:32 PM

Denise--I'm always so glad to see your name becaue your poetry is always a treat to read...this one was wonderful.  
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9 posted 2001-04-23 09:49 PM

Denise~ this made me think of and miss my Aunt Sue....beautifully done!    SEA
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10 posted 2001-04-23 09:57 PM

Now who could forget you and one of your
cadence kissed sonnets...
they leave a lasting impression  
just perfect and beautiful Denise...
and yes... to echo the others...
so lovely to see a poem from you.  

I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ...
Your broken heart ... your broken wings.
Denise
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11 posted 2001-04-24 08:02 PM

Martie - Thank you for your sweet reply!  

SEA - I wrote this with a couple of folks in mind, too, that I dearly miss. (((HUGS)))

Janet - Thanks so much for your lovely words!  
JamesMichael
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12 posted 2001-05-17 05:33 PM

This poem has a sweet flowing ambience...James
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13 posted 2001-05-17 05:42 PM

I was glad this was brought up again, I love it, it has a rich feel to it, and flows wonderfully, Denise, how do you do it!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee
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14 posted 2001-05-17 06:28 PM

Forget Me Not!
I like this so much I'd like your permission to send it to a friend.
May I?
Denise
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15 posted 2001-05-17 07:30 PM

Thank you, James, Kathleen and Tough Cookie for reading and for your lovely comments. I'm glad you enjoyed this! Yes, you may forward this to your friend Tough Cookie. I'd be honored. You could use the E-Card icon at the top right if you want to send it as a card. Also, welcome to Passions! I'm sure you will love it here!

[This message has been edited by Denise (edited 05-17-2001).]
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16 posted 2001-05-17 07:32 PM

very comforting  words, Denise *s
thank you for sharing

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Denise
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17 posted 2001-05-17 07:33 PM

Thank you, Maureen! So glad you enjoyed it!
HeAvEnS AnGeL
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18 posted 2001-05-17 07:44 PM

Denise
I am a new memeber here and i just wanted to thank- you for writing that lovly poem it really reminded me of my grandmother who justed passed on last month she loved the spring time and she loved flowers so your poem really made me think of her
thanks  
Denise
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19 posted 2001-05-17 07:54 PM

You're welcome, Heavens Angel, I'm glad it reminded you of your grandmother. I'm sorry for your loss (((HUGS))) Welcome to Passions. I know you'll love it here! Check your email for a special gift!
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20 posted 2001-05-18 12:11 PM

Denise
Such a beautiful picture you have painted from your palette of words.....wonderful!!
Take care......Sue

Suetang
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21 posted 2001-05-18 12:32 PM

Denise,
I'm so glad I popped in here this evening to find this beautifully written piece.  My visits seem to be few and far between. But hopefully that will change soon.  This is a very lovely poem.  Thank you for sharing it with us.  
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22 posted 2001-05-18 12:33 PM

wonderfully poetry...  enjoyed muchly.
Denise
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23 posted 2001-05-19 07:19 PM

Thank you, Sue, Eloise (how ya been, girl?!) and Mike, for reading and for your lovely replies!
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24 posted 2001-05-20 04:13 AM

OK. Densie.... I will not forget u ..lolo
Always remember..

I love to nice poetry.
Denise
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25 posted 2001-05-20 02:49 PM

Thank you, Waseem!  
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26 posted 2001-05-22 01:57 PM

Absolutely beautiful, Denise... what a lovely way to be remembered! *S*
joycerogers
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27 posted 2001-05-22 08:34 PM

Denise,

This is a seasonal beauty.  I can only imagine what a beautiful spirit you must have.

Observe the animals and they shall teach you the nature of life in man. Observe the earth and it shall reveal the nature of life in God.

- Joyce

Denise
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28 posted 2001-05-22 08:53 PM

Thank you, Ruth and Joyce, for reading and for your lovely replies! You've made me  
Nate Dogg
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29 posted 2001-05-23 12:49 PM

This is very beautiful Denise.....it's definitely good to see you again......peace!!

Nathan
Denise
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30 posted 2001-05-23 08:47 PM

Thanks, Nate! It's always good to see you too!  
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wow! very touching and comforting
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