How He Feels....................

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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2001-05-18 04:53 PM

You know nothing
of the valleys in my heart
what comforts me
what brings forth my smile
you call not upon
my strength
but my weakness
taking from me
what I need most
Asking of me
what you refuse to give
ignoring my tears
admonishing my needs
all the while demanding
yours be met

~SEA~

* PK inspired this....it came after reading his "This is how I feel"

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

1 posted 2001-05-18 05:01 PM

Ooh, Ouch. I'll have to go read PK post now.
I'll be back!

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-05-18 05:02 PM

Whoa! Besides PK, where on earth did this come from? I hope, dear SEA, this is borne on the creative imagination.

Aren't us guys so v e r y selfish?

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

3 posted 2001-05-18 05:04 PM

Ok, I'm back.
I would say that you've done quite a job SEA.
You've touched these feelings for sure.
Excellent!

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-05-18 05:05 PM

This is only how his poem made me feel ......how I felt like the GUY was feeling.....NOT ME....PK is wonderful,

this was pure inspiration.....just putting how it made me feel.....from HIS point of view

that's all

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-05-18 05:06 PM

thank you Sheri

PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

6 posted 2001-05-18 05:13 PM

Whew!...this sounded kind of negative here to me SEA...LOL

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2001-05-18 05:27 PM

well then I give up.....I didn't mean it negative....not towards you....sorry

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

8 posted 2001-05-18 10:12 PM

Nicely written, SEA...very good points, too!

sp

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-05-18 10:41 PM

Powerful work here, SEA. You have illustrated your point very well! Nice job!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-06-01 12:36 PM

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