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PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2001-05-18 04:08 PM

This all means nothing
And nothing is real
I can’t help myself

This is how I feel

Most of the time
I’m like some kind of ghost
And sometimes I take pleasure
In things that hurt me most
And sometimes I feel I’m drowning
Choking on my bitter tears
Or clawing at the one thing
Ringing in my ears
I’ll take anything I can
Time never seems to heal
The pain, this wounding pain

This is how I feel

They still keep taunting me
Numb my hurting head
I’m lost and all alone
You’ve left me for dead
Sometimes I can protect myself
Until the embracing dawn
Or lose control
From the one thing hanging on
You can paint me in a corner
Lock me up, throw away the key
You still just don’t get it

This is how I feel

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-05-18 04:14 PM

Hmmmm....wow...I really like the raw honesty here. As always you journey me through darkness...and as always, I enjoyed the ride!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-05-18 04:20 PM

makes me want to scoop you up and hug away the heartache.....this is very touching....

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-05-18 04:25 PM

Most of the time
I’m like some kind of ghost
And sometimes I take pleasure
In things that hurt me most
And sometimes I feel I’m drowning
Choking on my bitter tears
Or clawing at the one thing
Ringing in my ears
I’ll take anything I can
Time never seems to heal
The pain, this wounding pain

This is how I feel
=============================

you've been peeking in me head PK,
I always say, we are our own worst enemy
this is a very impact and emotive write
intense and deep...my two fav words for you

thanks for the friday fixx *S* ...
(theres time for more) *L*

tis never easy being a moth,
tis not easy being the flame.
what some never see is--
sometimes ... most times ...
they are one in the same.

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

4 posted 2001-05-18 05:03 PM

So much pain and agony, penned so perfectly.
I will say that you made me feel with your words PK.
Wonderful job here!

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-05-18 05:05 PM

Well done! Write on.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

6 posted 2001-05-18 07:57 PM

PoeticKnight,

"Most of the time
I’m like some kind of ghost
And sometimes I take pleasure
In things that hurt me most
And sometimes I feel I’m drowning
Choking on my bitter tears
Or clawing at the one thing
Ringing in my ears
I’ll take anything I can
Time never seems to heal
The pain, this wounding pain"

I have been at that place more times than I would like to admit. You have penned it so well. Great write

TaraB

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

7 posted 2001-05-18 08:02 PM

It will pass, I know.
Beautifully written, hugs from me.

Titia

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

8 posted 2001-05-19 12:15 PM

And you are not alone...very timely. Enjoyed the style very much.

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