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Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-05-18 11:07 AM

harboring lonely
dwells empty, when rather full
this heart be with you

discard with me then
fears of life's insanity
my heart is in you

calm me in these thoughts
then thrill by touch which is yours
own then my heart's beat

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2001-05-18 11:34 AM

Lady,
That's a large order, but I'll try. *L*

joycerogers
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since 2001-05-16

Posts 83
Texas

2 posted 2001-05-18 11:58 AM

This is beautiful. Oh that more hearts would discard hurts of the past and learn to love the one who is reaching out for them.

O Morning...wrap yourself around me today. Let me experience the peace I see in you.

Joyce Rogers

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-05-18 01:01 PM

to own your heart's beat
would be a treasure indeed
my heart's companion

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-05-18 01:15 PM

*sigh*. . .

how did you know that I'm feeling this today???

well done. . . superbly crafted. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-05-18 01:18 PM

this was very nice...the poem was sad but yet told well...i liked it and keep writing...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2001-05-18 02:32 PM

This is so gentle...I just love this

Cheryl Flemming
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since 2000-09-14

Posts 102

7 posted 2001-05-18 02:50 PM

This is wonderful with a wonderful message.

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

8 posted 2001-05-19 12:13 PM

Your poetry purse
delivers perfectly terse
in senryu verse

Lady in White--Beautifully penned Senryu.

It's good to be back in the blue pages.

Poeminister

[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 05-19-2001).]

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

9 posted 2001-05-19 12:24 PM

hearts with voices stilled
long to hear the words of loving
penetrate the void

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

10 posted 2001-05-19 03:25 AM

A wonderfully tender senryu, and the last line clinched the total submission to the person who is loved, as that is really handing over control in a loving way!

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~
Homepage: http://www.mysteria-poetry.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/451673

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2001-05-19 03:38 AM

LadyInWhite~

Lonely will not do
Take this heart I offer you
Mend ... LadyInBlue

~*Marge*~

*This was just so sweet.

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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