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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
harboring lonely dwells empty, when rather full this heart be with you discard with me then fears of life's insanity my heart is in you calm me in these thoughts then thrill by touch which is yours own then my heart's beat |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady, That's a large order, but I'll try. *L* |
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joycerogers Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 83Texas |
This is beautiful. Oh that more hearts would discard hurts of the past and learn to love the one who is reaching out for them. O Morning...wrap yourself around me today. Let me experience the peace I see in you. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
to own your heart's beat would be a treasure indeed my heart's companion Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*sigh*. . . how did you know that I'm feeling this today??? well done. . . superbly crafted. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this was very nice...the poem was sad but yet told well...i liked it and keep writing...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is so gentle...I just love this  |
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Cheryl Flemming Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 102 |
This is wonderful with a wonderful message. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Your poetry purse delivers perfectly terse in senryu verse Lady in White--Beautifully penned Senryu. It's good to be back in the blue pages. Poeminister [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 05-19-2001).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
hearts with voices stilled long to hear the words of loving penetrate the void |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
A wonderfully tender senryu, and the last line clinched the total submission to the person who is loved, as that is really handing over control in a loving way! ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyInWhite~ Lonely will not do Take this heart I offer you Mend ... LadyInBlue ~*Marge*~ *This was just so sweet. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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