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Déjà Vu
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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(My Muse - resurrected - has come to my rescue - with deft brief - sure cuts - and equally brief additions - see what has been done below) Déjà Vu Time, Déjà vu Where or when I’d always thought Time pulled out fast Like TP 'neath cat's paw, Now I wonder Does it When considered Rationally You weren’t here for me In ’61 or ‘90 I didn’t know you then No doubt you thought too “Where was he” But somehow we’re Together At the beginning Of a new millennium Your dream My dream Closing in on each other As a jigsaw puzzle Not some 5000 piece More simple Piece to peace Take one look “Ah – Yes – Here” It wasn’t like this Before These are “new memories” It doesn’t make sense It makes perfect sense How many chances Does God give To get it right How many ‘right’ chances Are there When you know it’s right You hold on tight It is just a matter of Dimensions As Rod Searling Makes his music weird Ask me now Ask me now on this Daliesque plane Now you’ve flown us To new realities Now our pieces fit And our peace fits I see your eyes sparkle And your smile warms Now your arms clasp Did this just begin No It goes back Before the end of the High School Beginning of us Time has no meaning Mapping New lives, We are now, We are real We are love We are us The first duty of love is to listen. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
We are now, We are real We are love We are us" you have summed this up perfectly, as always my friend....lovely from you...   Lauren~ **** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Oh Wilfred, how I would like to meet your muse...I need help, confusion reigns, I meet myself when I start again... I so enjoyed this.... how fortunate your muse has your pen to work with.... share her, would you? |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
your free verse is a fine write, Wilfred. Kathleen Blake |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
God gives all the chances you need...its perfect isnt it? This love? YES!!!!! |
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