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Freeing Soul
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Freeing Soul What words, ~ gone ~ in putting aside the reticent voices that have beleaguered my soul these long, lost, years was there wisdom in that voice, that whisper of passion now lost to the winds of time? What ear or eye missed the spark of light that was never fully kindled to awake ~ Morpheus ignored me often in an attempt to lead me to my destiny ~ in fear I held back but in age, now forge ahead what to fear? What can one say to me that has not been said before, and still I stand if I please you not, then perhaps it is I who has not been satisfied by you… two sides to every stroke of the pen and no white without the black to ponder upon No Socrates, I ~ but a being who reaches out in desire of one thing to ever last that being the whisper of a soul who might roam far into tomorrow to give voice to yet one more who would whisper in the darkness what to fear? Only self. Begone, self… the soul must fly… 13 May 01 [This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 05-13-2001).] |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
From the depths of a soul to be free. POWERFUL!!! No bold printing needed here, great poem - good luck! LP For those who believed in me -May God keep you. There is no fear in love..For perfect love casth out all fear. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
There is no teacher like experience....we do reach a point where there is little to fear since we have indeed heard it all....it is a release.. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Oh, I have to agree... this is very powerful! Very creative!  Sauni Sauni :) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
What can one say to me that has not been said before, and still I stand if I please you not, then perhaps it is I who has not been satisfied by you… two sides to every stroke of the pen and no white without the black to ponder upon ============================= Lady this is lovely and full of wisdom I enjoyed the flow of this, and the repetative use of whisper. way cool write... well done poetess of white  Did you make it to the Milky Way, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh yeah, so true. Now to tuck this into the treasure box.....wonderful Lady. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
It's a dirty shame - we don't learn faster = Great writing LiW - no matter your subject - your writing is telling |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
LP...indeed, no bold required....thank you... Balladeer, I take it you would agree, then, that we all learn something new every day....and when we don't, it's time to hang it up....me, I'm on the course of ever-learning, and ever-searching... Saunni, then I shall agree with your agree.... JanetMarie, I, too, am one with whisperings....thank you.... Gentle Spirit, I so enjoy your writing, thank you very much for looking in on mine... Mr. Yeats, to learn faster, use our learning wiser, and know more sooner than later...that would be wonderful...thank you! |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
powerful...this is truly great writing...thanks for the read if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
if I please you not, then perhaps it is I who has not been satisfied by you… ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Truly spoken. ~~~~~~~~~~ whispers in darkness not in hiding, but boldly speaking those lost words Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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