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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2001-05-18 10:39 AM


Don't Wish to Weep Alone

Today I plan to plant a Willow,
A tree to share my moments, sad.
Don't wish to weep alone again
Of losses deep, of what once had....

Beneath her branches, long and dangling
I'll sit and contemplate each word,
Those desires never sharing
Or mine that never have been heard...

The swaying back and forth shall calm me,
Allowing peacefulness to reign.
Leaning 'gainst the tree, my Willow
I'll myst my dreams, those that remain.

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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1 posted 2001-05-18 11:12 AM


How this started out, so sad, but ended on an up thought, that the willow would then sooth you, as good willows should...

I did so enjoy this...

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2001-05-18 11:37 AM


Nakd,
This is an excellent write. Enjoyed. Sy

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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2001-05-18 12:31 PM


Wynter, let the willow be a surrogate and let your smile shine for your future  

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Bill Charles
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4 posted 2001-05-18 01:00 PM


nakdthoughts - my willow also weeped, and it's wings held me close.  Sit by your willow and mine, and they will caress you, forever more.....

BC

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2001-05-28 11:12 AM


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Sy
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Bill..
thank you all..the willow looks wonderful near my fish pond...and as it spreads I will sit under it letting it umbrella me in calm thought
((huggssss))
~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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6 posted 2004-04-21 04:28 AM


awesome!
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