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Open Poetry #13

Furrows Inscribed

Coal Surrender
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since 2001-04-01

Posts 84
U.S.

0 posted 2001-05-18 09:01 AM

Furrows Inscribed
(At Dusk with Stephanie)

At jetty's edge
an amber glow
buoyant upon the
softening roll
of a calming sea
And hands peeling slowly
a blanket's cover
bare breast painted
with honey and wine
budding sweetness
a canvas for whetted lips
No thought for shame
wanton eyes imbibed
the hover of a shadow
spilling deep inside
Furrows in the sand
a quickened imprint
of a touch inscribed
upon the pages of
yesterday's souls.

Coal
©
5/18/01

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

1 posted 2001-05-18 09:18 AM

Beautiful, but I blush at the pictures this paints in my "old" mind. ME

Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

2 posted 2001-05-18 09:57 AM

But what warm blushing....whew....

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2001-05-18 10:10 AM

Hey Coal,
Your hot coals are showing. LOL Enjoyed a good write.

joycerogers
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 83
Texas

4 posted 2001-05-18 12:03 PM

WoooWeee!!! I love it, I love it, I love it.
I had to read this one again. It is so romantic and very tasteful.

Do some mo!

O Morning...wrap yourself around me today. Let me experience the peace I see in you.

Joyce Rogers

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

5 posted 2001-05-18 02:35 PM

My goodness, how lovely this poem is.
truly captivating.

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

Cheryl Flemming
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 102

6 posted 2001-05-18 02:47 PM

This is so very captivating.Really enjoyed it.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

7 posted 2001-05-18 04:20 PM

very evocative.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Coal Surrender
Member

since 2001-04-01

Posts 84
U.S.

8 posted 2001-05-19 06:59 AM

Thanks to one, and all!

Coal

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