Open Poetry #13 |
Beauty By The Lake |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
A daisy chain I made While I sat here in the grass The sun was shining so brightly And the lake looked just like glass I lay myself down amongst the cool, thick grass And gazed up into the sky Just in time to see a flock of birds As they flew majestically across the sky I then lowered my gaze to the flowers I saw bees and butterflies there They take the pollen from each and every flower And go through life without much of a care How I love spending time near the water A place to be at one with my thoughts Where nature's display is at its finest On a day when I'm feeling out of sorts So I sit and admire all of this beauty No painting could do justice you see And next time I'll come back to this paradise Where all of the worries of the world leave me Suetang |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
Your writing brought me right to where you were. It was beautiful and peaceful. Thank you so much for sharing. Roger |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Roger Thank you so much for your lovely comments and I'm glad you enjoyed my poem.....Sue. Suetang |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: There is such therapy in nature and this is beautifully expressed in your poem! I sent you an e-mail yesterday, but today I was told it was not deliverable. Sorry! I really enjoyed hearing from you. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I think we all need to take a break and go to this place..enjoyed this! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sounds very relaxing...James |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
And don't forget your fishing pole Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Seutang, We all have a secret place. Enjoyed |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all for your kind words and I'm so glad you enjoyed this. Take care....Sue. Suetang |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Know the feeling. Same overhere, when I go fishing in a nearby creek and watch nature awakening. Great. Titia |
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