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snowpants
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0 posted 2001-05-17 07:32 PM




I can see beneath your diamond clouds...
the truth is revealed in your crystal horizon...
you’ve bittersweet emotions for the setting of the sun,
regardless of the wonder it no longer enshrouds.

have you found the same friend as I
in the marigold flood of magnificence?
or have you yet to figure out the sense
in the melody of nature’s harmonious cry?

come take my hand, my sweet,
let me lead you beyond the disarray of now
into the unity that we have found somehow...
for it is stillness that tonight we will meet...

-kh 05/10/01


to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

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SEA
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1 posted 2001-05-17 07:35 PM


oh, this is beautiful  
Brad Majors
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2 posted 2001-05-17 07:52 PM


very pretty !!!
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3 posted 2001-05-17 08:12 PM


Very beautiful, Kris! Lovely presentation, great message!
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4 posted 2001-05-17 08:51 PM


snowpants,

    Beautifully written  

TaraB

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5 posted 2001-05-18 12:42 PM


I can see beneath your diamond clouds...
the truth is revealed in your crystal horizon...
you’ve bittersweet emotions for the setting of the sun,
regardless of the wonder it no longer enshrouds.

have you found the same friend as I
in the marigold flood of magnificence?
or have you yet to figure out the sense
in the melody of nature’s harmonious cry?
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very cool imagery and anticpation here K
marigolds rule  





tis never easy being a moth,
tis not easy being the flame.
what some never see is--
sometimes ... most times ...
they are one in the same.

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6 posted 2001-05-18 12:53 PM


in the marigold flood of magnificence?"

  this line is to die for.....

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


joycerogers
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7 posted 2001-05-18 04:10 AM




There you go, painting them pretty pictures with words...again.

May His glory be fresh within me.  May my heart be renewed in His hand.

Joyce Rogers

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8 posted 2001-05-18 11:06 AM


I love the power of flower imagery.  I really liked your Marigold sunsets.  

New member,Kacy aka Midnitesun


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9 posted 2001-05-18 11:48 AM


Snowpants,
Pretty words, pretty thoughts, pretty poem.

snowpants
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10 posted 2001-05-18 06:13 PM


SEA:  thanks!  I am glad you liked this!  

Brad:  thank you!  

Denise:  hi there!  thanks for your reply!  it's great to see you here!  

rp25:  thank you, m'friend...glad you enjoyed!  

JM:  OOOOHHHH...thanks a mil for those pics!  they're the coolest!  hmmm....thanks for your reply, as always, my 'cool' friend...

Kathleen:  well, I thank you dearly, my friend, for your wonderful reply...you always have the best things to say about my writing!  I truly appreciate it!  I am glad you liked this!  

Joyce:  why, thank you for the compliment...I'm glad you enjoyed!  

Kacy:  Welcome to Passions...I am happy you liked this!  

Seymour:  thank you so much...I'm glad you liked this!  

sp  

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

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