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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
 I can see beneath your diamond clouds... the truth is revealed in your crystal horizon... you’ve bittersweet emotions for the setting of the sun, regardless of the wonder it no longer enshrouds. have you found the same friend as I in the marigold flood of magnificence? or have you yet to figure out the sense in the melody of nature’s harmonious cry? come take my hand, my sweet, let me lead you beyond the disarray of now into the unity that we have found somehow... for it is stillness that tonight we will meet... -kh 05/10/01 to be with you... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh, this is beautiful  |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
very pretty !!! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Kris! Lovely presentation, great message! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
snowpants, Beautifully written TaraB |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I can see beneath your diamond clouds... the truth is revealed in your crystal horizon... you’ve bittersweet emotions for the setting of the sun, regardless of the wonder it no longer enshrouds. have you found the same friend as I in the marigold flood of magnificence? or have you yet to figure out the sense in the melody of nature’s harmonious cry? =========================== very cool imagery and anticpation here K marigolds rule    tis never easy being a moth, |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
in the marigold flood of magnificence?" this line is to die for..... Kathleen Blake |
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joycerogers Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 83Texas |
There you go, painting them pretty pictures with words...again. May His glory be fresh within me. May my heart be renewed in His hand. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love the power of flower imagery. I really liked your Marigold sunsets. New member,Kacy aka Midnitesun |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Snowpants, Pretty words, pretty thoughts, pretty poem. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
SEA: thanks! I am glad you liked this! Brad: thank you!  Denise: hi there! thanks for your reply! it's great to see you here! rp25: thank you, m'friend...glad you enjoyed! JM: OOOOHHHH...thanks a mil for those pics! they're the coolest! hmmm....thanks for your reply, as always, my 'cool' friend...  Kathleen: well, I thank you dearly, my friend, for your wonderful reply...you always have the best things to say about my writing! I truly appreciate it! I am glad you liked this! Joyce: why, thank you for the compliment...I'm glad you enjoyed! Kacy: Welcome to Passions...I am happy you liked this! Seymour: thank you so much...I'm glad you liked this! sp  to be with you... |
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