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Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

0 posted 2001-05-15 06:33 AM

In my pit of black despair,
dark angel comforts me
takes my pain and gives me air
sets my spirit free

I do not know what I give him
except my pain and sorrow
he comes reveals my solace whim
gives me hope for the morrow

When the night is long and black
and misery is my shroud
dark angel comes, with his dark sack
that carries rainbows proud

I don't know why he comes to me
in my darkest despair
I only know when I'm not free
his presence is felt there

his bleeding wings an earthly sign
of pain he bears for me
he covers me, and I resign
from worries; I'm set free

but what do I a craven slave
give him in return
I only offer a life he craves
with passion still to burn

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

1 posted 2001-05-15 06:50 AM

(((hugs))) to you ...

Be well (as you say)
Regards,
Sudhir

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

2 posted 2001-05-15 08:11 AM

Kethry,

a well written piece. I hope you do not often find yourself in that place...

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-05-15 09:08 AM

Oh, Kethry, these dark angels are something else aren't they?
Boy, I tell you they can sure put us through the mill.....good to see you here,
no one can leave this place, once you get in you can't escape.

Kathleen

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

4 posted 2001-05-15 11:09 AM

I was taught at a young age, Dark Angels were from HELL. Yet reading this you have put a different perspective on them. I've read your poem twice and you make Dark Angels
seem more life giving. Let me know if this is what you meant. I get told quite often here that I don't understand what people are trying to convey.

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

5 posted 2001-05-15 11:40 AM

A very deep write, from a very good heart...

well done little one....

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

6 posted 2001-05-15 12:00 PM

Kethry....this is very well said....sounds like you and he need each other.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

7 posted 2001-05-17 08:26 AM

Sudhir, beloved one. you bring me comfort and peace as always.

Kathleen,
as always you read my heart.

INclan, thank you for your comments.

Inot2B you are correct. Spot on about the life giving in fact.

Decaflame, thank you

Elizabeth, Yes I think we are co-dependant.

be well
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2001-05-18 05:24 PM

Interesting thoughts Kethry...James

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2001-05-18 05:31 PM

Kethry,
Your dark angel is something like my Randy dragon. LOL *L* Sy

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