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Mother Earth
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Mother Earth |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Mother Earth show my worth Hold me in your embrace And crush me under the weight Of your love, my fate I need to know if I lived in vain For what else is there? But to allow myself to die this way And return forlorn to the air Long have I lived like this, Eternal, the state I am in My suffocation is my bliss This knowledge is my sin I need only to lie on your ground And let you wrap me up In wind with arms all around Until I choose to give up Oh Mother, please come and smother Take me, your long lost something other And crush me under the weight Of love that feels like hate |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very well done ME...enjoy much... jwesley |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very intense  |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Very well written! |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Well written words PK. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
well done PK, both in form and in content. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
WONDERFUL!!! excellent work.... and happy birthday, btw... *grin* *winksmooch* (dotcom) rofl;.... hehe ...blissful... this one's a bloom and a verse... lol.... hehe luvyasista |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Now this is deep!! You know what happens when Mother Earth wraps her arms around you, right? Do you really want or need this? Great writing though. ME |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
quote: ...and herein lies the discontent, that we are not the ones to choose, but follow that pre-ordained destiny that stretches to infinity so that when....when that day comes, and we be then that long lost something other....can we only give ourselves up to Mother Earth.... what a read.... |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Thank you all. I just got in to work just now and saw the replies... But, Doreen, its not my birthday. Who said its my birthday? |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
hehe.. sorry... it was "PoeticaL's" birthday yesterday... i read the pen name wrong... just ask anybody around here... i read things wrong around here all the time... rofl!!!! excellent poem and happy birthday when it DOES roll around... geesh... *blush* and here's another *winksmooch* just for YOU!!! hehe... too funny |
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