Straight Line - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #13

Straight Line

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-05-17 03:22 PM

Straight Line

in all my shortcomings
in all that I am
is the knowledge
of understanding
shoulder to shoulder
is where we stand
I write your words
you write mine
a song of melody
sung in harmony
danced in a straight line

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-05-17 03:55 PM

I think one of the things I strive for in my life is for others to understand my own shortcomings, thanks for this one, Helen.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

2 posted 2001-05-17 04:11 PM

I fall short again and again, but always strive to improve myself, to walk in that "straight line" when speak about. Thank you.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Cuddlez
Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362

3 posted 2001-05-17 04:18 PM

Love your name:-)
what makes you sure it is such a straight line?

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

4 posted 2001-05-17 05:01 PM

Is this kind of like 'straight line dancing'? Loved the hope and lightness of this!

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.