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juanrodriguez
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since 2001-04-17
Posts 66
ontario canada

0 posted 2001-05-15 10:14 PM


as all birds fly to the south
scared to die or freez
my heart has gone off my mouth
b4 it dies upon its knees
not bc I'm weak
or bc I'm dumb
its bc I loved u
and I miss ur tender lips
I've kissed b4 I'm gone

my boss has told me stop it
my boyz have sayd live on
I just cant stop thinking
of who do u belong

I did do it an purpose
to concive that lovely child
not bc I hate u
it was bc I loved u
and wanted us to last a wail
as us three in only one small file

I can't force u to come back
I cant take tha baby back
I just wish u let me see her
b4 my death comes back

I always loved u way back
now there's only memories
and the hope that u'll come back
to say I love u baby

I've dreamed about u lately
and asked the big man why
he always lets me cry
is it bc he enjoys it
or just bc u do
no matter whats the answer is
still
I LOVE U BABY

LOVE IS HARD TO FIND ....BUT WHEN U DO ITS HARD TO DEFINE  JUAN PABLO

© Copyright 2001 juan pablo rodriguez - All Rights Reserved
Mother_Earth
Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan
1 posted 2001-05-17 05:02 PM


juan, you have bared your soul for us all to see. You did a lot to cause her to go, now I hope you will except what she wants.  I wish you luck and here are some hugs,  ME
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