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| Open Poetry #13 |
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When Love Finds You |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
When Love Finds You Some say it is fate That helps you find a mate For that day impatiently we wait It is a crazy game… love Finding the one you dream of Who fits you like a glove To lay to rest all fears Wipe away the lonely tears And spend your remaining years No more feeling blue The world is brand new When love, finds you Marina May 17 2001 It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Marina, this is lovely and almost makes me want to start looking! ME |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
To lay to rest all fears Wipe away the lonely tears And spend your remaining years No more feeling blue The world is brand new When love, finds you ======================= sound so simple dont it? lovely rhymes of anticpation Marina-Girl heres to being found  tis never easy being a moth, |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
only if the gloves are velvet! Kathleen Blake |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
I like you rpoem. But to me it seems a bit naive- the world is brand new when love finds you? i disagree But i still really like the message of inspiration and hope in it.. Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Nope, you can't hide from love  Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Often I think about the necessity of a mutual attraction..common interests..feeling comfortable with each other..availability, so many items come into play...James |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Mother_ Earth, well if it almost did...then I'll just have to do better. Jan, thank you as usual and in the meantime...I can dream can't I! Kathleen, velvet gloves huh? That maybe an Adult poem! thanks...Cuddlez, thanks for your comment. I just meant that sometimes you tend to see things in a different light when your in love. Thanks for stopping by. Interloper, there were truer words never spoken! James, as asual you are right. So many things to look for in a person and you would think it easy to find wouldn't ya? Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
I wait after these years I wait & your poem helps my faith. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
the craig, good I'm glad! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
What a love token you wrote. Full of hope, it was a wonderful read. This I will keep. let our hands communicate what's in our heart. A Wisp of a brush... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and oh the wait! |
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