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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-05-17 10:02 AM


Every one needs something to believe in
and right now I believe in me and you,
for I believe in your heart
and I believe that this love is true.

I believe that whatever it is
that has made you go away,
will soon pass like a cloud overhead
and that you'll be back someday.

I believe that for now you will do
those things that you feel are a must,
and I believe that somewhere in our future
once again we shall be just "us".

And I BELIEVE IN YOU
that your dreams will come true,
someday you'll share not just a part
but again we will share our hearts.



On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~


[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 05-17-2001).]

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angelswing
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1 posted 2001-05-17 10:45 AM


Ahhh, how romantic, maybe love is forever .
That's a realy nicely written poem, I enjoyed it .
Thanks a lot .
L.of.L. Tommy .
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Alan
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2 posted 2001-05-17 12:01 PM


I liked this. I hope your dreams and wishes come true if that is what you really want. Wonderful poem
Alan

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3 posted 2001-05-17 04:19 PM


I believe that whatever happens, it will be what's best for you both.  I wish you my best.

Michael

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"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-05-17 04:26 PM


I hope it is true, I love happy endings....and beginnings  

Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2001-05-17 04:31 PM


I believe, too.  In fact, that is the title of one of my most favorite songs.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


sea_of_okc
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6 posted 2001-05-17 04:53 PM


Believe it is so, and so shall it be.
Thank you for sharing. Hugs, Steve

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2001-05-17 04:54 PM


beautiful poem of promise and faith GS,
I liked the way you changed off the rhyme scheme for the last verse.
well done poetess gentle  

tis never easy being a moth,
tis not easy being the flame.
what some never see is--
sometimes ... most times ...
they are one in the same.

Gentle Spirit
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8 posted 2001-05-17 09:14 PM


My deepest gratitude goes out to all of you for your kindness.  It is a very trying time of life right now, more so for him than for me.  I believe in many, many things, but more than anything......I believe in him, now if he can just reach deep enough......and believe in himself.  Thanks to you all and hugs.  
Donna

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

thecraig
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9 posted 2001-05-22 04:10 AM


Sharing hearts & building unions of love . Nice poem.
latin passion
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10 posted 2001-05-23 10:53 PM


very touching poem. hugs coming your way. Believe!
passing shadows
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11 posted 2004-06-01 12:27 PM


yes! amen!
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