Open Poetry #13 |
I Believe |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Every one needs something to believe in and right now I believe in me and you, for I believe in your heart and I believe that this love is true. I believe that whatever it is that has made you go away, will soon pass like a cloud overhead and that you'll be back someday. I believe that for now you will do those things that you feel are a must, and I believe that somewhere in our future once again we shall be just "us". And I BELIEVE IN YOU that your dreams will come true, someday you'll share not just a part but again we will share our hearts. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. ~Me~ [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 05-17-2001).] |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Ahhh, how romantic, maybe love is forever . That's a realy nicely written poem, I enjoyed it . Thanks a lot . L.of.L. Tommy . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
I liked this. I hope your dreams and wishes come true if that is what you really want. Wonderful poem Alan |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I believe that whatever happens, it will be what's best for you both. I wish you my best. Michael Proust- |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I hope it is true, I love happy endings....and beginnings Kathleen Blake |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I believe, too. In fact, that is the title of one of my most favorite songs. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
Believe it is so, and so shall it be. Thank you for sharing. Hugs, Steve |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
beautiful poem of promise and faith GS, I liked the way you changed off the rhyme scheme for the last verse. well done poetess gentle tis never easy being a moth, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
My deepest gratitude goes out to all of you for your kindness. It is a very trying time of life right now, more so for him than for me. I believe in many, many things, but more than anything......I believe in him, now if he can just reach deep enough......and believe in himself. Thanks to you all and hugs. Donna On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
Sharing hearts & building unions of love . Nice poem. |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
very touching poem. hugs coming your way. Believe! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes! amen! |
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