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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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There was nothing laid before me there was nothing quite complete filling up my mouth so sweet and leaving me with thoughts of greed... There was NOT a thing UNdone... there was NOT my only one... quivering beneath the sheets every map lamplit by street.. we are there, together, no? within the light of a halo, of every flame adrip in show-- I beg of you--let's dance flambeau! May the shadow cast the meaning every silence rest is keening-- every wail a tongue of will-- every tear a love in spill... Mercy this you find in me Mercy You'll abide in me.... Faith My hand a summoned quest Faith the trust of fingers wept... I will dip the nun's sweet noon... holiness, cannot come soon, and each priest I thought heard me was just another fantasy. Everything? I lose...I find. Not quite at the time, I MIND. Everything? I was before? Was just another padlocked door. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
wow......just can't believe the depth of your writing and how I relate to it so well......great write lady  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, Exceptional write, enjoyed very much. Sy |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Exceptional indeed... Serenity Rules!!! Regards, Sudhir |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This reminded me of the confessional and boy that's been years! it really is an exceptional piece. Kathleen Blake |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Goodness girl, this is fantastic! give me more, please Maree [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 05-17-2001).] |
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