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Jeffrey Carter

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since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

0 posted 2001-05-16 11:24 PM

~~~This was written for all of those that have felt the power of love. May you feel it more and more every day.~~~
JC

What fate has this thine hour brought
over vastly darkened seas?
Two hearts with common ties that bind
searching out their destiny.
Two ships set sail from different ports
Love, to navigate the course.
And in this hour they found each other
on destiny's rocky shores.

[This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 05-16-2001).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-05-16 11:33 PM

This is beautiful, made me think of a lighthouse!!!

Good to see you, Jeffrey.

Kathleen

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-05-16 11:59 PM

Really really fine Jeffrey. Powerful images and I love the 'romantic' language used to convey the message.

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

3 posted 2001-05-17 12:02 PM

This hits home...thanks

RMW
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since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

4 posted 2001-05-17 12:10 PM

Thank you, Jeffrey. Well written. Bob

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

5 posted 2001-05-19 12:09 PM

Very beautiful poem, Jeffrey....thanks for sharing my fellow Carolinian!

Nathan

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

6 posted 2001-05-19 12:31 PM

Jeffery,

What a beautiful picture this paints when you read it

I'm glad I stopped in to read

TaraB

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

7 posted 2001-05-19 12:34 PM

Beautifully written, Jeffrey...

Thank you for sharing!

~Tier

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2001-05-20 06:12 AM

Very nice Jeffrey...James

redwriter1
Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 480
Franklin, TN

9 posted 2001-06-18 12:02 PM

Words of wisdom......... must somehow..........relate to a real world.

Come sit by the sea with me.....
and make love into poetry.
(smile)

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