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angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

0 posted 2001-05-14 05:39 AM

Dancing in the Shadows .

Why do I live in shadows ?
They’re better than I am,
Yet this should never matter,
When they can see me jam .
I’m kicking in the shadows,
Dancing load and proud,
I’m the shadow that will not leave,
The one who speaks so loud .
I don’t care if you are more,
That she likes you more than me,
I don’t care what happens in your life,
From the shadows true I see .
Were all nothing anyhow,
At least my dance is true,
Look down to the sweetest shadows dance,
Soon I’ll swallow you .

Written by Tom Baker .©

Try not, do or do not, there is no try .
- Master Yoda -

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-05-14 10:15 AM

Ah yes, continue the dance....

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

2 posted 2001-05-14 12:11 PM

I will .
Thanks for your reply .
L.of.L. Tommy .
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Try not, do or do not, there is no try .
- Master Yoda -

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

3 posted 2001-05-15 07:36 PM

You dance baby! i like this one

hugs, g

"...if i ran away,
i'd never have the strength
to go very far..."

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

4 posted 2001-05-17 05:30 AM

Thanks, still dancin' here .
Getin' down over here . I appreciate the reply .
L.of.L. Tommy .
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Try not, do or do not, there is no try .
- Master Yoda -

Enola
Member

since 2000-02-11

Posts 138
England

5 posted 2001-05-17 10:56 AM

This rules, swalllow them for me my dear!!

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"Knowledge speaks, wisdom listens"

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

6 posted 2001-05-17 11:01 AM

Thankyou Debbie dear, glad your back . I will do my best to engulf as many trendies as possible .
Ta matey .
L.of.L. Tommy .
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'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

7 posted 2001-05-17 12:05 PM

This is good ...I enjoyed it.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

8 posted 2001-05-17 12:16 PM

Goodness, I wasn't expecting that ending, but shadows can swallow up a person or a love or a life. Hope you don't stay in the shadows too long.

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

9 posted 2001-05-17 02:28 PM

Dance Tommy dance...your shadow to my light...what a contrast...hehehe...I like this one

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

10 posted 2001-05-24 05:15 AM

Thanks very much all, when I wrote this one I was in a bit of a stess with someone, but instead of just giving into depresion, I decided to be confident and vengeful . I am very glad you enjoyed it . I will try not to swallow any of you lot as I rise up to take my sweetest revenge ... HAHAHAHAHAHA .
Thanks again .
L.of.L. Tommy .
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'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

Qumar Fatthi
Member

since 2001-05-20

Posts 59
Pakistan

11 posted 2001-06-16 04:26 PM

At least my dance is true,
Look down to the sweetest shadows dance,
Soon I’ll swallow you .

yeh i am ready for making me SHADDOW
This poem's thinking is very good i agree
with u
"SHADdOWS are better than poeple"
caz people always try to do sins
a good try.............
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and thanx for replaying me
'dreams' i am new commer at piptalk.com
thanx again

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