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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2001-05-16 05:40 PM


For the story behind it, read 'I feel so lost..Poem I'


I holler sadly over the land
where did my beloved one go
oh, if you find him, bring him to me
I can't live my life so alone

But all around it was so quiet
my dearest, he stayed concealed
and I, I shouted throughout the land
oh, please bring my love back to me

My love, my love I am so cold
my love, don't let me get chilled
my love, whom I used to know before
my love, this is not what you want

My love, my love, come back to me
I wish you could be as you were before
the lonely land where I'm roaming now
is not the land where I wish to be


[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 05-16-2001).]

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Decaflame
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1 posted 2001-05-16 05:42 PM


Depression is such an ugly disease, I am very glad your husband found his way out of that blackest of holes....
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By the sea
2 posted 2001-05-16 06:24 PM


I just read all three and was very touched by the depth of feeling.  I'm so happy to hear that your husband is now better and back in your loving arms where he belongs.  My best to you both.

Michael

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"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Secret Whisper
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Through the Looking Glass
3 posted 2001-05-16 06:54 PM


This is a very wonderful piece. I dearly loved it.

"What I was living, the same am I now, dead." --Capaneus, THE INFERNO

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