Open Poetry #13 |
Dancing With June |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Dancing With June By: Noah Eaton 3/24/01 Her every smile is the sunshine, lighting my heart with glee Happy lemon-lollipop skies waking my diamond-teared eyes Her sighs are soft winds, caressing me as I dream sweet dreams Feeling I am floating on a cloud in heaven, living in paradise Listening to her breathe, I see nature bloom, flowers dancing ballet Bumblebees sing in harmonic melody as the kookaburra nests itself at home Her eyes are diamonds of the night and pearls of the day Iridescent tears falling from happy eyes, reflecting the spring rainbow When I look deeper into them, seeing that special place we truly share In your lovely pupils I see the moon, promising I’ll always be faithful to you She laughs like a choir of angels, windchimes jingle with her flowing hair Flowers blossoming all at once, as the sun blushes in it’s raspberry sherbet hues The day I fall in love in you will be the day heaven blossomed in me Nothing is more beautiful than Dancing Than June, my eternal spring |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
feels like it was written from the heart... Jamie |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Rmnance is sweet to the ear. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
It must have been wonderful to have been this young once. I have almost forgotten. Joyce |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
She laughs like a choir of angels, windchimes jingle with her flowing hair Flowers blossoming all at once, as the sun blushes in it’s raspberry sherbet hues Like the above lines the most! I think there's a typo in the last line that kind of fights with the title of the piece. |
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