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I Am With You
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I Am With You |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I'd like to leave you with a gift, I wish you find it waiting here. I want to mend your heart bereft. Cease your trembling, calm your fear. You should know, you call on me. Always always, I am yours... I'll be your breeze, eternal sea, I'll hold each key, for all locked doors... for every heartbeat evermore, my heart beats thrice, I'll love you more... and everytime you wonder when, I'll keep you close, I'll be your friend... and every time you back away, I'll let you go, and wish you stay... every tear that you might cry, I'll kiss away till eyes run dry... and if God's mercy you might need, then God will find me on my knees... You are the blue that colors sky, wistful in release of sigh, you are the green that paints the leaves, you are the you that sings in me... you are golden in the sun, and silver moon as day is done... twinkling starshine down from sky answer to the question, why? And know you, when this day is through, you're not alone--- I am with you. *repost for a smile, from Open #8* |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
absolutely LOVE every word.....  so beautiful I am keeping this |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is a definite KEEPER, my friend... wonderful, really wonderful... Regards O Serene One, Sudhir |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
I got me a biggin smile from thisin |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Such a beautiful poem, and I loved these two lines: " you are the you that sings in me..." ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You should know, you call on me. Always always, I am yours... I'll be your breeze, eternal sea, I'll hold each key, for all locked doors... for every heartbeat evermore, my heart beats thrice, I'll love you more... and everytime you wonder when, I'll keep you close, I'll be your friend... and every time you back away, I'll let you go, and wish you stay... every tear that you might cry, I'll kiss away till eyes run dry... and if God's mercy you might need, then God will find me on my knees... ============================ inspire on high baby... and kissed by muses of rhyme divine. this is SUCH a COOL poem. (and it feel so good to write LIKE this) you rock ... do ya know that  tis never easy being a moth, |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I love this! Nothing more...I just love it.  |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
serenity, Very cool poem Makes ya feel all warm and fuzzy to know you have friends like this TaraB |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Super, my friend...'nuff said!! jwesley |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Absolutely beautiful hon. Sighing. Maree |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wow, this is very beautiful and well-written....I love your rhyme cadence too...brilliant writing!! Nathan |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
So beautiful, one of your best! Thanks for re-posting it, it leaves the reader with such an inspiring, peaceful feeling Take care, Melissa~ The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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