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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-05-16 07:52 AM


Blossoms in the spring
floating purple butterflies
Serena at Three


Savanna

Savanna is a red rose
bright and velvety
her gifts are beauty and love

[This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 05-16-2001).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-05-16 09:00 AM


Very nice, Cat!
VAS
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2 posted 2001-05-16 10:31 AM


Very nice, are they daughters???
kitkat
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3 posted 2001-05-16 11:05 AM


These are wonderful :-). I Love Haikus.

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

athena4
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4 posted 2001-05-16 04:16 PM


Sandra,
      Two beautiful poems, for two beautiful little Princesses!
         Love, Elise

Sven
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5 posted 2001-05-16 06:56 PM


beautifully perfect poems Sandra. . .  

these are what haiku should be. . .

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Sunnyone
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6 posted 2001-05-17 12:56 PM


These are so beautiful.......as beautiful as the little ones they are written for!!  Sandra......they will be so proud of their mimi.......

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!
  
    


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