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Paula Finn
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0 posted 2001-05-15 12:44 PM


This hasnt been done in a while...just thought it might be fun to try again...hope y'all dont mind...


I walked alone
and then you called
Look at what you've done
Last time we met
I planted a seed
Far above the clouds
Without words
To dream...Forever in your thoughts
A world of make believe
Dare we dream
Sometimes I wish
What if
What more than this
Unravelling
A time for us
Rejoice
Forever


Thanks to all the wonderful poets for thier fantastic titles...now come on...YOU do this

© Copyright 2001 Paula Finn - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2001-05-15 12:50 PM


fantastic work, Paula

regards,
sudhir

Titia Geertman
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2 posted 2001-05-15 01:02 PM


My, my, this is a nice one.
Here goes my planned evening, this is more fun to do than the thing I had in mind.
Thank you.

Titia

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2001-05-15 06:54 PM


Paula~
Exceedingly well done.
~*Marge*~

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SEA
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4 posted 2001-05-15 06:56 PM


Paula,   this hasn't been done for a while... this is very good    SEA
Irie
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5 posted 2001-05-15 06:58 PM


Very Cool and well done.
I haven't seen this for some time.  
This could be fun!  

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"



catalinamoon
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6 posted 2001-05-16 07:24 AM


Fun idea, I will see if I can do it  
Hows life, Paula?
Sandra

PoeticKnight
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7 posted 2001-05-16 04:34 PM


This is a great idea and you did it very well.
Jamie
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8 posted 2001-05-16 09:04 PM


this kind of thing must require lots of searching and culling.. well done  

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
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9 posted 2001-05-16 09:19 PM


I'm amazed at how well you integrated titles of poems to come up with this.  You are quite a unique talent.  Roger - a new member.


Sunshine
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10 posted 2001-05-16 09:33 PM


Well when you have great titles, it's a snap....
jwesley
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11 posted 2001-05-16 10:09 PM


Aren't they beautiful though...???


jwesley

Paula Finn
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12 posted 2001-05-17 12:57 PM


Sudhir...just having some fun...thanks

Titia...lol sorry to spoil your plans...have fun

Marge...thanks sweet lady

Sea...I remember doing one like this...but its been so long I thought it might be fun to toss in here..thank you

Irie...It is fun...thanks

Sandra...Life is exceedingly sweet right now dear one...how are you?

PoeticKnight...so cmon try

Jamie...its something to do as you read...the titles are what catches my eye...thanks

Roger...welcome...and you flatter me sir...unique? Thank you so much

Karilea...you are right...great beginnings are here for the choosing

jwesley...ooohhhhhhhhhhyes!!!!!!!!

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